if you don't like a super powerful, prodigy, perfect OC character,then don't read this. The first paragraph will be enough to give you an idea of.. what you will dislike. If you like easy plots, unrealistic situations and illogical personalities, then this is your story.

Hello, I do enjoy your story, but I think this chapter moved much too fast and was very forced.

I think the information you've anounced in this chapter should have been shown over a longer period of time.

Other than that, good job

Omgosh I love it

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Love it

Very good

Well it's nice so far but I want more story and I kinda expect her to have red hair or blond cause of there parents

Ohhhhhh this is getting good

You didn't mention on why this chapter took too long to bring out.

More chapters please!

Looking good so far, I think it's good that Rayne is powerful, but the only thing is that I think she is too powerful. I think it would of been better if when she's 12 or 13 years old say she's nearly as strong as itachi and then after the timeskip when she is about 15 or 16 years old you make her were she just as strong as naguto/pain and then when the war starts she's even more powerful.

This is a start to a good story. I like Rayne, she seems awesome. I would love to see her first meeting of Konoha and all it's ninjas.

Please update soon!

-lostfeather1;)

really sad self insertion fic.

I hope that this story isn't one of those hiding the Uzumaki siblings relationship a secret or have long as hell updates!

This sounds rather promising and I can't wait till your next update!