Well, it's good that this story has been updated and trust me, I do like the battles that Benjamin and his wife Cynthia had against the first three Gym Leaders along with them catching some new Pokémon for their collection. Also it was interesting to see Pikachu and May, even Glaceon wanting Ash to understand that he can't keep hovering above Cynthia forever and it was also interesting to see both Ash and May meeting with Chairman Rose... unaware at first of his true colors, which I'm sure they would find out eventually.

Also liked the moments Cynthia had with not just Benjamin but also with her respective Pokémon as well. Then there's the fact Victini wants to stay with Nessa for a while, makes me curious on if he would eventually become a human in order to be with her proper like May's Victini when he fell in love with Sinnoh Champion Cynthia (hence their cameo in the beginning of the chapter). Oh and why do I have a feeling you based Fire Paw having had all his moves except Growl being deleted by the punk who abandoned him off of Ashanti having all her best moves deleted prior to becoming Relena's Pokémon? Just curious that's all.

Now that I think about it, I'm surprised about the lack of Family Guy jokes... I wonder if you're showing some restraint in that regard. Oh and love the moments between Keith and Lana as well as them catching some Pokémon along with preparing for their first Gym Battle in Galar… then of course, there is me liking that Sandy is getting some love along with her becoming a Vaporeon. It makes me curious on how they will handle the Gyms in general since there is a chance that there would be a bit of a divergence for Team Storm in terms of Gym Leaders from Galar. Regardless, I look forward to seeing more of the story very soon since it would be good to see what happens in Part 2 of the journey through Galar. Who knows? Maybe Goh and Chloe could make an appearance as well as Chloe's family in some form or another, even as a cameo or so.

Once again another great chapter you make and it's great and onto the next chapter then. In the next chapters can Brendan and Anna appeared along with their children and Ash's pikachu and May's glaceon should also appear along with their kids. Also Lisa Ketchum should appear since she haven't been appeared in person in this story only appeared in mentions or call and text from her siblings and parents.

Well, I never expected to see Keith, Lana, Cyntha, Isabella and Ren taking part in the Galar League but then again, Keith and Cynthia's parents also being present might make things a bit more difficult, especially as there is a chance the two might face them later on in the Galar League. Also liked how you have Hop and Gloria, even Marnie, Team Yell, Bede, Chairman Rose, Sonia and the Galar Gym Leaders (not just Bea) in the mix as well which makes up for the anime only having Leon, Yamper, Chewtle, Drednaw, Corviknight, Wooloo, Nickit and Scorbunny/Raboot pretty much. Also should mention that I found it hilarious that Isabella pwned Bede like he was nothing, I found it to be absolutely hilarious... also Ren owning those two Team Yell members is just as funny and while Hop easily got owned, at least he accepted his defeat like a man unlike Bede. Also glad that Keith and Lana got some more Pokémon as well, not to mention that I like the uniforms that the group each received which suits them personally.

Either way, I look forward to seeing how the Gym Battles will go from here, especially making up for Galar not being featured that much in the main anime and instead, we have Ash and Go traveling to different places just to catch Pokémon... with Go catching more Pokémon than Ash granted but nevertheless. Makes me curious on what could happen later on, not to mention if the two will eventually take on the Galar Gym Leaders or not... I mean anything is possible.

Well, I never expected to see you to update this story but I am glad you did either way. Also a shame that Keith and Lana got disqualified from the Battle Royal and they got suspended from this year's Royal Cup but hey, at least they always got each other. Also really liked how Keith, Lana, Hayato and Vanna became friends with Bea along with Keith and Lana's wedding. Oh and I also am surprised that Team Blizzard is still around because I thought they would have given up at this point but clearly I was wrong. Then there were the funny moments which I really liked in the story as you must really like to include them huh? Makes sense, also I had a feeling the "Yeehaw" thing was taken from Renji and Roux having sex with each other in your GS verse.

It was also good to see how Keith and Lana's attempt to take on the Atlantca Islands Gyms went so hopefully we would see more of the story to come. Who knows, maybe Lana would already have Sandy aka her Eevee from canon here and we might see Go and Koharu later down the line. Anyway, hope to see more fairly soon as I am liking how things are turning out as a whole.

Once again another great chapter you make. Can Brendan and Anna birch appear later in chapters and they and their children have a part in this story too and ash's pikachu and May's glaceon and their offsprings.

I do like the story I really do and I get this story is about ash and mays children and their adventures but I feel we rarely ever see may and ash appear in this story at all can u please have them more involved then they normally are since they are one of the main characters in the story and I feel may and ash can help and be more involved in this story then they are now and even add some advance shipping moments between them

Well it's about time we saw more of this story, I really hoped to see it continuing in some form or another and glad it did. It was a really interesting twist to have Keith and Lana taking part in the Suicune Valley Conference as well as them earning their first two badges in the Atlantica Islands although what surprised me is the inclusion of Bea aka one of the Galar Gym Leaders... one from the Sword version specifically. Regardless it's pretty interesting to see your handle on her and especially with the Atlantica Islands having a way to counter the whole Dynamax thing and even Gigantamax thanks to Keith informing Relena about it after his victory against Bea. In fact I was even more surprised to see Bea taking part in the Suicune Valley Conference and even learning how things work differently in the Atlantica Islands than in other regions... especially Galar. As for the whole hybrids thing, that's something Bea is going to have to try and digest let alone process.

Regardless, liked the funny moments in the chapter as well as the really cute ones and especially found it funny when Bea tried to take on SGT Goldstein and failed due to him knowing how to counter Dynamax and Gigantamax in advance. As for the battle that Keith and Lana had against him, really liked how it went... a shame we never saw the battle against Amelia but maybe we'll see it in a flashback later down the line. For now, am looking forward to seeing how things will go in the next chapter as you're on a roll here.

Finally you updated the story and it's a great chapter I just hope that the dynamax and gigantamax will be use by ash his family and friends in later chapter of the story.

once again another great chapter could the next chapters of this story have brendan and anna's daughter ashely and her siblings appear along with ash and may pikachu and glaceon their friends and family and have a family reunion.

Well about time you got this story back in the works, and never expected to see Ash and May having had a son but hey it was an interesting twist nonetheless. Oh and since you liked Ash being with Lana, never thought you would have his youngest son with her for this story but again it is a great twist.

I liked how you handled their relationship so far and looking forward to seeing more in the future plus I am curious on how you will handle the Ultra Guardians thing in your story and even Galar for the matter with Pokémon Sword and Shield coming out on November of this year for the Switch... also liked the small Looney Tunes reference with Golduck, Bunneary and the Abomasnow aka a nod to Daffy, Bugs and the Abomable Snowman (the one who wants to cuddle with a cute rabbit and name him George... ironically this guy aka the Abomable Snowman could've inspired Elmyra from Tiny Toon Adventures and even Pinky, Elmyra and the Brain).

Also found it funny that Shadow the Umbreon is afraid of Fairy-Type Pokémon and something tells me it is not going to leave anytime soon which makes me feel almost sorry for him. Especially with the Fairy-Types that Keith (not to be confused with Bandit Keith Howard from Yu-Gi-Oh!) caught and I found it interesting that Keith likes Pokémon with four legs.

Hopefully we will see more of Keith and Lana's relationship soon, especially with the two having to take part in the Alola League together because of Surien having ate some of Keith's Rare Candies and Isabella is against the idea of anyone using Rare Candies. Also liked the whole thing about Keith liking Doom and Lana hating it (something tells me she will also hate Mortal Kombat for its blood and gore as well, especially the Fatalities) and makes me curious on how she would view the character Lana from Hyrule Warriors.

Nice work on the chapter Sparky, I know with the new games coming out it means more pokemon for Ash and May to catch I mean we need to wait but I think May would get fire starter.

Thank you for updating and the chapter is great. Can you put Brendan and Anna's daughter asheley in the next chapter alongside her parents and update the next chapter soon cause I want to know what happen next.

Wow, didn't think you would update this story after a while but hey not complaining especially as it was good to see Hayato and Vanna taking on the Kalos Gym Leaders, although it was also a good twist to have some additional rules as well as having Viola with a Beedrill and a Vikavolt instead of her Surskit and Vivillon. Also shocked that Kristina tried to steal Hayato from Vanna and glad her attempts failed even when Hayato and Vanna lost their first attempt in taking on Viola.

Oh and was feeling worried when Hayato shut himself off from Vanna but glad he got some help in the end, was surprised to see Kristina even try an underhanded tactic but hopefully Serena will make sure that her eldest daughter won't do that again especially given how he and Vanna are faithful to one another and would always be together no matter what.

Also surprised you used the "on like Donkey Kong" line from Despicable Me 3, something I just used in my recent chapter for Pokémon Rise of Heroes for the Victini and Celebi fight, guess I ended up inspiring you to use that line at some point when it came to Vanna and Kristina, especially with me not blaming Vanna for feeling hostile towards Kristina for trying to take Hayato from her. Plus it was funny that Hayato and Ren were the only ones to eat the extremely hot Ramen that even Fire-Types can't take... I'm surprised Naruto never tried it.

Am looking forward to seeing more especially with Hayato and Vanna's journey through Kalos now that they managed to win their rematch, I'm surprised neither were aware of Hayato's parents' first loss against his grandmother from his father's side due to a technicality but oh well. You did great on the chapter as a whole.

Once again another great chapter keep up the good work update he next chapters cause I want to know what happened next.

Wow, I didn't think that you would get this story back in the making as it has been a while since I've read anything from it. Also it was interesting to see what Marco's relationship with Lily is like as well as the funny moments between the two of them.

Also I never thought Team Blizzard and the Blizzard Witch would make their move plus I am surprised Marco, Lily and their friends never encountered Samurai who has a hut inside the Viridian Forest then again I don't think he has much importance to the plot of your story as it seems.

Oh and glad that Lily has three new shiny Pokemon as I am sure they would help her a lot in the long run of the story and I never thought that Lily prefers to use Appricorn Poke Balls but hey no problem there. How ironic because my story has Articuno being a target for Team Rocket fairly soon once I get to the Legendary Birds arc.