Coucou, j'ai tout relu avant de lire ton dernier chapitre et je trouve ton histoire originale et très bien. J'ai hâte de connaître la suite.
J'ai par contre l'impression que Noctis est souvent le seul à faire des efforts le pauvre. Enfin Luna a sans doute ses raisons d'être sur la défensive et ça ne doit pas être évident pour elle non plus...

On a vraiment envie qu'ils se rappellent mieux leur rencontre avec le Léviathan en début de chapitre, qu'il faut juste qu'ils soient unis. Aïe la montée des eaux je ne m'y attendais pas :( vite qu'ils soient libérés pour empêcher leur suite de s'entretuer...

Bref, hâte d'avoir la suite y compris le mariage ! Trop hâte.

Merci pour ton histoire ;) bonne inspiration pour la suite et au plaisir de te lire bientôt j'espère

This plot is better than the original story lol.

Ugh I did not notice this story was updated till today when I was cleaning out my inbox! Please keep updating! I want to find out what happens next!

Very interesting well written story. I hope you continue.

Though I'll need a rereading of the last 6 chapters before this, I'm quite interested in seeing this story matter how long it takes a good story is worth the wait.

Oh wow! Welcome back! I'd be definitely interested in reading more of this story.

I'm so happy to see this story is still alive. :D

Yay an update! Looking forward to see what happens next! I hope Noct and Luna can work things out!

That “Luna Vs Noct” battle of words...damn! It was hella hilarious! Keep on writing, cuz this is Amazing! Please Update! :3

need chapter six...:)

I'm happy to see you're back! I hope everything is okay with your life and that you'll be able to keep posting again :D I'm curious if this OC will have a repeated appearance . . . and I hope in the next chapter we can get some closure on Luna's feelings :3

Glad to see an update! I only found your story last week and I really enjoyed what you've written so far. In particular, I appreciate the way you're writing the characters as mature people that make reasonable decisions and have relatable reactions. A good job keeping everyone in character while giving them something new to experience! Hope to see another update soon!

Nice job so far. I find your writing smooth and concise. I liked the first two chapters the most, when Luna seemed stiff and about to reject Noctis. The tension was great there. But when they finally broke the ice it was nice, too. I certainly enjoyed Noct's awkwardness and Luna's teasing. The only thing that bothers me a bit is perhaps the fact that Noctis seems rather useless in combat, which is a pity, no matter how much I like the idea of Luna being far more stronger and competent than him (as was certainly the case in canon).

I hope you haven't run out of steam yet and that there's going to be more!

Im loving your story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

really liked it. please update soon!