I certainly hope you expand on this. Loved it.

I was right there with you on Nate being the mole, especially after he proved himself to be untrustworthy and torturing Callen. Also, it would have been a shocking turn of events, great for the storyline. BTW: I still don't trust him!

Nice job! Please continue. I like Nate being a bad guy.

Very thoughtfully put together. Nice job!

Wow, Nate huh? I don't see why not. The whole incident with Callen and the file from his past that he used to taunt...water boarding. I was kind of surprised that Callen didn't lose faith or trust in him on the show...they just glazed right over it...but then they DID just bring him back...you could be on to something...I think a tricky turn would have been Anna...what with being Callens girlfriend and Arkady's daughter...and Hetty has a fondness for her...it would be a real slap in the face...but Nate...huh. Good work.

Awesome story, I really loved it

I was always bugged with Sullivans description of Deeks. NO WAY he could know that unless he had see Kensi with Deeks. But this explanation serves as well. I realy dont know whos the mole, but for what I read around, its someone we know already. Since its not someone from the 'main' team (Sam-Callen-Kensi-Deeks-Nell-eric) Im okay with it.

French fan

Your story IS excellent... I AM a Little sad because at the beginning, if I saw the show it was for Nate. I would like him tout comme back.

And i would Like 'janvier' to be the Big Bad Guy !

Bonne année 2017 !

First person is fine. After the episode, Hate DID seem to be a little off. You coudl be spot-on.

Ooh I loved this. I don't normally like first person stories but this was great! Like you I'm thinking the mole is Nate with either Sullivan or Nell helping. Nell and Nate have "history" together so that's my guess. Keep going!

OMG love this story. Would love you to continue if you feel you can depending on what goes on with the TV series.
Anyhow, whilst I really don't like the idea of any of the team - even Nate - to be mole, I think it could well be. We all know what he did to Callen that time and we don't really know what might have happened to him whilst on assignment in the Middle East & he's been out there a long time. Would hate it to be Nell even though she & Nate have history but she has acted suspiciously on occasions.
Was suspicious of Sullivan - not sure of his role except as someone in a similar position as Kensi who can spur her on. Didn't think he was Navy so therefore not sure how he could get NCIS data.
Glad that Anna has been cleared and that Kensi is back and desperate to help her friends.
The line "No, I'm afraid I'll kill him" is priceless.
Am waiting with bated breath to see whether you will continue with the story.

This is quite interesting. A friend and I are trying to find out who the mole could be. I'm so excited for the next episodes

Ooh I like this story! I don't normally like first person stories but this is great! Like you I'm thinking the mole is Nate with the possibility of Nell helping him. Nate & Nell have "history" together we were told. Or it could be Sullivan in there too - he's dodgy to me too. Keep going!

I love this. I think the build-up about the mole has been so big that it has to be someone important to the show like Nate. And maybe last year's trouble with Nate was a foreshadow of this. Nate does know them all so well that it makes sense that he would have sent Sullivan to get information on Kensi and Deeks. And also that he would have been able to set up Sam, Deeks and Callen. I can't wait to see what really happens, but no matter what your version in this story is great.

Interesting. Can't wait to see where you go with this