thanks for writing those missing scenes

I read all the three chapters of your story when you posted it and really liked them. I found your fanfiction very original, but at the same time quite adherent to the real Season 8 plots and characters' development. The interactions you wrote between Kensi, Deeks and Detective Whiting were brilliant and really well-written. Now, after last episode aired, I couldn't help reading your story again this morning and now commenting it! It seems you had more or less guessed right one of the options Detective Whiting was offering (blackmailing?) Deeks. Very good job! I hope you will continue this story over the hiatus.

great story. I would love to see a sequel where he chooses to go undercover in the Molina cartel.

Wow, cool story. I liked how you kept Whiting from going soft on Deeks- I think that fit her character.

But I really need the follow-up, LOL!

Excellent job on Detective Whiting . I really like the way you wrote the Kensi /Whiting also captured Deeks perfectly in his interactions with Whiting at their house. I am thinking a hiatus story from you when we actually see what the cliffhanger is would be an excellent next writing choice!

Well done you! You actually wrote Whiting well.
Thank you for the S/O I enjoy our discussions. I also need to S/O to our girl iShip. She posted something today on tumblr of similar ilk. I agree with her, this could be the path to Deeks, M. I can't see the benefit of arresting Deeks again! Plus, like you, we still don't know where her memory is. This also may get our boy closer to signing papers. Who knows. What I need is for him to put a ring on it so we can get on with our lives!
You did a great job on this.
So what's next?

Good work! The resolution of the mole hunt was emotionally draining but has resulted in more questions than answers.
What about Whiting and the IAB?
Where is Sabatino?
What does the future hold for Kensi and Deeks?

I have recently discovered the NCIS LA fan fiction website and now I am hooked. Sliding doors.

I absolutely love this looking forward to the update x

please continue! It's really good! :)

This chapter is amazing.

Very nice! I hope Whiting survives.

I thought this was only a one-shot, but I liked this ch 2 ... and Im so curious about Whitings fate, so, please, continue soon !

This was just a wonderful chapter. It had all the discussions we will not get from the show. I loved Deeks and Kensi's intimacy at home, both physical and emotional. I enjoyed the discussions about Hetty. I so enjoyed Kensi talking about Sullivan and how she should have been smarter. I also liked the way you wrote Deeks in this situation, not pressing her but knowing there was an issue. I am curious to see where you take Whiting.

Here's hoping Whiting has memory loss from the severe trauma and blood loss.

Impressive work even without a third chapter...
Can't wait for what you have up your sleeve for the third one though.