Reviews for Alola, Ash! (ON HIATUS) |
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![]() ![]() I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. looking forward to the traitors, (especially Pikachu) being taken down a peg. Lookng forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eevee is a fox, that means... Flareon Sylveon (Oh what?) Espeon (this is too cute) Vaporeon Jolteon Umbreon Leafeon Glaceon ... are all foxes... wow. |
![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() Love it! Please update? Also in the age/name list you put Lilly. Does that mean gladion and null will be in this too! Cuz Type null is my favourite Pokémon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You got a good start here keep going i want to see what happens |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's some grammar and spelling mistakes, but so far it's pretty good. I think Umbreon might be a dog-like Pokemon, but I've always been unsure on the matter. Maybe just go with Umbreon or dark type when you write it. |
![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() 3 it! Please update ASAP!:):):) Love the concept, the idea too :):)): and the ship:):) One question: what is the elige 4 and why and how is Serena one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far it's pretty decent, I would love for there to be more chapters, and if you can the more chapters you make can they be longer |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first chapter! But did Pikachu go with them willingly or was he forced? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up the good work! Longer chapters please! |