Reviews for Alola, Ash! (ON HIATUS) |
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Toby Hark chapter 2 . 4/17/2019 I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer! |
storyreader21 chapter 2 . 7/28/2017 Nice story. looking forward to the traitors, (especially Pikachu) being taken down a peg. Lookng forward to the next chapter. |
Scarlet Angelix chapter 2 . 6/5/2017 Eevee is a fox, that means... Flareon Sylveon (Oh what?) Espeon (this is too cute) Vaporeon Jolteon Umbreon Leafeon Glaceon ... are all foxes... wow. |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2017 Please update |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/17/2017 Love it! Please update? Also in the age/name list you put Lilly. Does that mean gladion and null will be in this too! Cuz Type null is my favourite Pokémon. |
Sin Danimal chapter 2 . 4/22/2017 You got a good start here keep going i want to see what happens |
Dragonsrule18 chapter 2 . 4/22/2017 There's some grammar and spelling mistakes, but so far it's pretty good. I think Umbreon might be a dog-like Pokemon, but I've always been unsure on the matter. Maybe just go with Umbreon or dark type when you write it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 Please update |
AmberglassAstra chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 3 it! Please update ASAP!:):):) Love the concept, the idea too :):)): and the ship:):) One question: what is the elige 4 and why and how is Serena one? |
The last Scorpion chapter 1 . 4/18/2017 So far it's pretty decent, I would love for there to be more chapters, and if you can the more chapters you make can they be longer |
Dragonsrule18 chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 Great first chapter! But did Pikachu go with them willingly or was he forced? |
MCUtuberFanGal chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 Keep up the good work! Longer chapters please! |