Reviews for Alola, Ash! (ON HIATUS)
Toby Hark chapter 2 . 4/17/2019
I loved the plot twists... Please continue the story... You are an amazing writer!
storyreader21 chapter 2 . 7/28/2017
Nice story. looking forward to the traitors, (especially Pikachu) being taken down a peg. Lookng forward to the next chapter.
Scarlet Angelix chapter 2 . 6/5/2017
Eevee is a fox, that means...
Flareon
Sylveon (Oh what?)
Espeon (this is too cute)
Vaporeon
Jolteon
Umbreon
Leafeon
Glaceon ... are all foxes...

wow.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2017
Please update
Guest chapter 2 . 5/17/2017
Love it! Please update? Also in the age/name list you put Lilly. Does that mean gladion and null will be in this too! Cuz Type null is my favourite Pokémon.
Sin Danimal chapter 2 . 4/22/2017
You got a good start here keep going i want to see what happens
Dragonsrule18 chapter 2 . 4/22/2017
There's some grammar and spelling mistakes, but so far it's pretty good. I think Umbreon might be a dog-like Pokemon, but I've always been unsure on the matter. Maybe just go with Umbreon or dark type when you write it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
Please update
AmberglassAstra chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
3 it! Please update ASAP!:):):)
Love the concept, the idea too
:):)): and the ship:):)
One question: what is the elige 4 and why and how is Serena one?
The last Scorpion chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
So far it's pretty decent, I would love for there to be more chapters, and if you can the more chapters you make can they be longer
Dragonsrule18 chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
Great first chapter! But did Pikachu go with them willingly or was he forced?
MCUtuberFanGal chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
Keep up the good work! Longer chapters please!