Add more chapters please

I dislike Kendall only because she got between Ben and Mal. Maya unintentionally getting between Lucas and Riley was acceptable because they weren't actually dating. Kendall getting between Mal and Ben is less tolerable because not only are they dating, but they're each other's true love. That's why she was able to snap him out of Uma's love spell.

Which also means I have an issue with how long it took for him to come clean. He should've been able to just say it because he knows he's in love with Mal. Again, Lucas actually needed time.

If you're gonna do a triangle, do it with a couple that isn't already confirmed as true love.

Hey! Unicornhorse21, if you are reading this, although you have to delete her account, why dont you adopt her stories? It'll be like a piece of her is still with you and try to finish it off, she told you to delete her account technically and not the stories :), I know its hard and I feel bad for you too, but keep her alive, and see what she wished to start and finish * Sad smile* unicornhorse21's sister, RIP, I know how you feel about bullying, I went through the same thing, and please, make her happy, finish the stories, she'll be glad to know that it will be finished Mack, sorry once again.
Love twilight sparkle and now I gotta take to the skies

I hope you update soon

Hey Maddie this review is for chapters 3 through 6. Life what can say it's annoyingly in the way. Hey if you close that rhymed! ;-)

ON TO MY REVIEW: (Sigh) Kendall's crush on Ben is annoying. I'm surprised Amy hasn't cornered her about it. Getting to practice damn some jerk named Austin shares Cad Harming stupid opinion of "girls shouldn't do sports". Heck Amy isn't into them be even she would say a girl can do any sport if she has drive to want it.

AUSTIN YOU JERK! Made Kendall hurt her ankle. True Jay that acronym RICE is odd but hey if it works than don't mock the name of it. Asking Jane to castlecoming? Carlos relax Jane is like Amy with that sweet/simple things.

CHAPTER 4: Ha I knew that RICE method would work. The tourney team Olympian Gods damn the guys were nervous but understandable. Toughest team to beat? That sounds really bad. Sophie-Clarie's pink ruffling crop top cute.

Alright that was highly annoying to me. Ben/Mal/Kendell's love triangle is similar to Locus/Riley/Maya's own. For the record I ship Locus/Riley completely. Kendall needs to cut her losses because Ben loves his Mal wholeheartedly & deeply.

CHAPTER 5: Double damn Sophie-Clarie girl did beautifully. Kendall's dress for castlecoming was wonderful. I LOVE LONNIE'S MORE THO! Alright Mal's white dress did scream PRISSY PRINCESS to me. But Mal next time tell Sophie to make more purple Isle-ish than.

OH MY CHERRY BLOSSOMS! FINALLY MY AMY APPEARS I THOUGHT SHE WAS FORGOTTEN HERE! (Awww) Henry that compliment was sweet. Don't worry Sophie you will fine. I hope the headaches go away soon. Stephan Show's son cool. At least now Kendall is out of Bal's hair. ;-)

CHAPTER 6: Alright I spoke to soon when I said "Kendall is out of Bal's hair". I honestly don't blame Mal & Stephen's angry remarks. I mean seriously what Idiot thought putting Ben & Kendell as Cutest Couple funny?! Of course that would cause a fight.

Love Lonnie comforting Kendall. Beautiful reference to "School of Secrets" hello royals? Big deal their still crazy tanagers at a school. WAY TO GO LONNIE! Recorded Linda's obsessive confession greatly.

I enjoyed it and I was hoping that Linda would be expelled or sent to the Isle of the Lost

Amazing and funny chapter

Beautiful

Great chapter and if I had to guess the curly blond is Chad that stood up for her

Great chapter

You can use my OCs Shan Yu Jr and Hayabusa Jr.

Shan Yu Jr looks like Leo Howard and wears a cloak while Hayabusa Jr looks like his father but with two different color eyes. Left Eye Red and Right Eye Blue

Wow nice start and poor Kendall

I like your stories a lot and I live in Dallas, Texas. You and twinsister are wow writers. but i was thinking that maybe you should change your stories cover. Remember this is just a suggestion, you don't have to if you don't want to.

Loving the story so far. Can't wait to see where you go with it. Also you portrayed Bree amazingly :) x

Kendall, that's not funny. Sophie-Claire most definitely DIDN'T look like she was going to a funeral. I mean a black/pink complete outfit is too perfect for that. ;-) Sophie hanging out with Audrey? I would watch my back. That girl may stab you in it.

(Sigh) Kendall you are a shape-shifter but no matter how well mastered you are, your never done learning. About to throw a fireball? Beautiful move Kendell. The target being Mal? Malice thank you for stopping her.

True not many girls at Auradon Prep are well "sporty" but Evie, Lonnie & Maleficent's daughters. Mainly Lonnie & Kendall tho, because Evie, Amy & a little Mal are into sports. ;-) Bree is very nice, no problems there.

Well at the picnic tables, that was eventful everyone is busy. (Giggles) Jay good on you apologizing to Mal about stealing Benny-Beast away for Tourney. Conan have fun, Carlos help him out. Freddie whisking Amy to the library oops forgot. Don't worry Kendall you will have time with your Pinkette sister soon. Glad Kendall made friends with Bree, I knew she would.

THE IDIOTIC GASTON TWINS?! Hey Kendall you want someone to kill them? Ask Amy to do it. It would be her pleasure. (Sinister Smile) Hey Ben is NOT stupid! Oh those Gaston Twins are already driving me nuts! They snuck into the limo? Ben take them back to The Isle!

Very sweet concept. Yes Lonnie romming with Kendall nice. Maybe it would help Kendall if Amy talked to her one-on-one. (Shrugs Shoulders)

Sophie-Claire romming with Amy? YES! That will be fun. Conan so didn't need to grab Ben & threaten him, Amy already did that. ;-)