I literally cried yesterday after reading about rex's insecurity. Why the hell did zoe slap him he just tried to comfort her. Tbh i feel like telling him that how much i like him and give him a tight hug to soothe him. He deserve almost everything in this freakin' world. Max is the reason of their argument all these trouble. ( Well, keep it up bro! )

I feel like kicking max's guts and punching his face only because of his teasing zoe and rex are having so many problems. That innocent boy (rex) got slapped from his nearest one, hus girlfriend only because of HIM! uggggh i can't express my anger.

** "Y'know Rex, maybe one day we'll both be in the same situation where we'll be married and have kids." Rex blushed redder than an apple, making Zoe giggle.** in this part i can literally imagine rex's face the way he blushed XD

Question, isnt it a bit much/redundant to make the grandma godmother as well?

*sniffs, sniffs* Amazing. I-I'm speechless. This fanfic was just amazing! I love it so much!

Why is it that Terry always has to have an upsetting backstory involving his family.

Here he was orphaned as a newborn, which makes me believe I now know why he was so loyal to Dr.Z until now. And in Retold they die. Heck, what happens to Terry here is similar to another characters backstory.

That being said, I did enjoy this chapter. Hopefully the war is now over

Well shoot.
Hopefully Dr. Z will realize before to long that Zander had a good reason for leaving and that Seth is a nut job

Again, Max’s behavior is very OOC. I really hope this’ll end that.

On the topic of OOC characters, Seth shouldn’t really care if Zander left or not. One less idiot to deal with when he takes over.

oh my god max, you dingus! i feel like punching you in the face so hard, you won't have teeth in your mouth left in it!
do not ever do a prank like that, EVER!
that's going too far!
other than that nice chappie )

i'm ok with this, since you did this note to tell us I will not be one of the people who are complaining about this break. have fun with the family vacation and I hope you are able to get help with moving into your apartment.

Yeaaaaah

Max is coming off way too much like an a#####e here.

It’s okay if you don’t like the guy, but bashing a character in your fics comes off as childish.

now will the 'guests' be his adoptive siblings or possibly niece and nephew?

YYYYYEEEEEESSSSSS! THIS IS AWESOME I CANT BELEIVE IT HA HA WOOOOOOOOOO!

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tails this is creeping me out. and stop the high pitch screaming you sound like a girl who
just found out what makes babies XD

I actually have a few names girls:Aria September Julia maisie calenza boys:Chris smith mark Justin ben

annd i think that Seth is starting to get himself alienated from the alpha quad , whats left of it , with the fact they now know that Zander has a very good reason for leaving , heck all three were orphans and now one of them is going to be a father. strong emotions for the three of them , with the one who's doing his best to give his kid the life they all wished they could have had - a life with parents raising them.