Beautiful, hunting story.

This was absolutely brilliant.

It’s heartbreaking to think that Legolas will never see his mortal friends again, but what a great read this was. Thank you for sharing it.

Oh, the plot thickens! I love how you revel the mystery bit by bit. I didn’t really care for Tauriel in the movies, but I really like how you’ve written her. And now, Thranduil is here. I can’t wait to see what he has to say. :)

What a very very clever & creative plot! Who is that fourth person? What happened to Legolas? And I must say, this is such a beautifully written story. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. (I feel so bad for Tauirel and our tender hearted Legolas.)

What an unusual fic! Fantastic! Great ideas here and beautifully written. Thank you for such an enjoyable read,
All the best.

I think that a chapter, or a spin off fic, told from those left behind would be interesting. show them finding Legolas, their POV of the vision, etc.

Good story !

Very good story, and I can imagine only one situation where Mandos would not allow Legolas to remember. If Ladir sexually assaulted Legolas. That would utterly destroy any elf, traumatize all the other elves, and be horrifying for any other race to see. Just a thought, though.

Wonderful story.

This was very good and beautifully written. I still don't understand why Ladir turned on Legolas that way; it wasn't jealousy, so I can only think that he must have been insane. I'm very glad that Thranduil pardoned Tauriel for her crime of turning her weapon against him. Very sad though, that both he and Legolas chose to enter the Halls, rather than returning to life. I can understand Thranduil's choice - he wanted to be with his wife and parents (although they would have eventually reunited in Valinor), but Legolas was still young, although of course we don't know how severe his wound was. How ironic though, that Legolas survived the violence of life in Mirkwood, the Battle of Five Armies, Helms Deep and the final battle before the Black Gate, only to be assassinated by someone he thought was a close friend.

What an interesting story concept! Love the idea of spirit wounds. You weave suspense so well into the story that I could not stop reading. And your writing is fluid and easy to read. Great job. Looking forward to reading more.

Gracious goodness, what a place to end! I do hope you continue- this is stellar.

This is fascinating. I can't wait for the truth of Legolas' betrayal and death to be revealed.

The suspense is so awesome it's palpable, please update soon