This is a really well done ending, something that if it happened in show I would be happy with.
The picture was have for Blake’s final moments, since she brought up her semblance being used to put her in danger, is her and yang, beaten and weak, on the floor together, Salem about to kill ruby and as yangs reaches for Blake’s hand it passes through a clone and she takes the hit for ruby.
Real sad but I feel it’s satisfactory conclusion

really this is unholy good :3 you are an author just to my tastes :D definitelly gonna sub youis there a Patreon or any website where people can donate you? I'm really considering it :D

For two chapters this story has surprising depth and care put into it. I would want to call it sweet but it's also tragic and in a way both are beautiful. I might be over thinking it or maybe emphasizing with the characters a lot but doesn't matter. I love the story.

...damn it Qrow

I love this hehe! I wish I could’ve been able to read about their marriage and if the new child was born. And if the new child is a girl and being named after Pyrrha

darn you crow. lol

I love the little details that help sell that she is blind.

And seriously Qrow?

I like this but you should have made a chapter for the wedding.

Goddamnit Druncle Qrow.

Lovely little universe built here

This is great! I want to see the new kid.

Good story. Very interesting way of dealing with a possible outcome and the results of it. I also like the way of shipping things differently. Makes things interesting and fun. Thanks for this story and keep adding more as you feel the story comes along.

As someone who is legally blind. You've made Ruby's 'misadventures' very genuine and quite relatable.

Hope to read more from this wonderful fic...!

This is a lovely story, i love it! Thanks for making this.

God Dang it Qrow! XD

Drunkle Qrow is gonna get his ass kicked for that.