Reviews for Kiwi |
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![]() ![]() i feel as though i should point out that snakes don't actually have eye lids |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious..the ending as well was a nice touch |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing chapter, I couldn’t stop smiling throughout. I know that this is supposed to be an AU of crawlersout but I just can’t help but wish that this just takes place ahead of where the current story timeline is. Leon is the adorable sweet but incredibly smart child with a stubborn streak you would expect from a combination of Harry and Gellert, and his relationship and dynamic with Tom is just so precious. Can’t wait for the next update from you(doesn’t matter which fic it is)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed every minuet reading this story I really hate to see it end. I wish there would be more to this tale. Thank you for sharing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is hilarious. I love it! Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't care where you write it I just want to read grinderwald and Tom reaction to harry being the master of death I know their not gonna be surprised because they're smart I just want the three of them to talk about it or something |
![]() ![]() ![]() So quick question. Why does Leon call Harry Harry instead of mum? I kept thinking about it and I couldn’t figure it out. Love this AU |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is very unique! I love itthank you for writing this |
![]() ![]() Love this story. I know it’s a super spin off from crawlersout, but I love the idea of femHarryxGrindelwald 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter as usual! It was great to see some Tom and Leon bonding, you did a fabulous job of keeping him in character. Just one question though, is there any particular reason Leon calls his parents Harry and Gellert instead of Mom and Mad or some variation of that? I mean Gellert I get to extent considering there are safety issues plus the man's own personality to take into account but I don't see Harry going for it. Clarification would be appreciated, but regardless great job as always, I'm a huge fan of all your fics! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Impressive how you made Tom into a doting older brother and yet succeeded in keeping him in character (from how he is in crawlersout) :) This was such a sweet, little thing to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story but I really really hope you write more of crawlersout soon! |