Esto se está poniendo un poco estúpido.

Usar blanco es mucho menos aterrador y más heroico.

Creo que sus acciones son un poco contradictorias a lo que dijo antes.

Creo que atravesar a una persona en estado sombra cuenta como tocar.

La escritura es un poco seca pero la historia lo compensa.

Admito que esto puede ser interesante.

Just finished bingeing this story, and I absolutely loved it! Not many people can pull off power escalation like this without it devolving into a huge mess, but you did it beautifully!

Loved it! My favorite power theft Taylor that I've read to date. Combined with my love of protagonists evolving into gods, this was right up my alley. Thanks so much for writing this and sharing with us.

Amazing. Loved it. Binged it. You’re one of my all time top authors. Thank you.

I always thought a good test of a "For the greater good" group is will they sacrafice themselves? Or just every one else. It doesn't by any means make Cauldron the good guys but there is a difference at throwing thousands of other peoples lives away while balking at any kind of sacrifice to yourself.

Seems very dumb for Taylor to not incinerate the bodies. First off due to them being radioactive and all that. Second who knows what kind of power BS could be used to clone, reanimate etc them. Plus Guy with unheard of levels of regenerations just "assumed" to be dead... yeah. I know I am reading this after it's complete and know there are 20 more chapters to go. So I am just going to say I wouldn't be surprised if he pulls through.

After all he's had Plot armor 15 all story long so far. But maybe Taylor got a sword of plot slaying finally?

I always thought Tagg was funny. Yes the Cauldron people have a sneaky plan to make Brockton a hell hole to push out more triggers and look for useful powers imo. It's an active experiment even in canon. But Tagg is just a moron. People like him think Parahumans are a threat, so they do their absolute best to turn them against them.

The entire system is designed to push people either into the PRT hands or against them. Even people working for the PRT are treated like garbage and probably leads to half the leaks of info that gets out there.

I have to say I find Taylor's father actions more and more annoying. Protection of criminals at all cost is what got the Worm-verse in the state it's in. Even cops shoot to kill against armed robbers, especially in a hostage situation. Yet he expect her to invent some way to disarm them all without hurting any one? I understand he might be afraid of her going completely physcho but setting up such unrealistic expectations just pushes people farther away when they fail to reach them.

Then he goes on to refuse aid that might keep him alive, which sure bomb in your body scary. But if he truly cared about Taylor's mental health he needs to put a little more thought into what would happen to her if he died. He has to know she'd go off the deep end completely. Also real surprised she didn't get coils power... Wasn't that part of her price for helping Tattletale?

The fact Taylor points out the flaw sadly doesn't make it less true. Tons of plans, nothing gets done. Every step of the way she's constantly under attack from all sides. Every thing that could go wrong does go wrong for her. Maybe there is a reason, maybe Contessa is using her "path" to ruin Taylor's life to make her stronger.

Still very odd that Taylor can't go 24 hours, heck 12 hours most the time without some life or death struggle or some new group out to get her. Mean while Sylar just walks around freely killing and taking what ever he wants... I think I'll have to upgrade him to Plot Armor 15 at least now.

Pacing seems to be a continuing problem with this story. Taylor is never given a second to breath. This makes any gains or powers she have feel less earned because she's not given a single minute to even come to grips with anything. That means she just has to BS her way through every thing through luck or over whelming force... I say it again adding the villain from Hero's was a bad idea at least so early.

Especially since I can't help but feel he wouldn't be half the threat he is portrayed as. You would think some thinker precogs or masters would take care of him with ease. I haven't seen a lot of the Hero's series as I found it pretty boring after a while. But just seems odd he has zero problems while Taylor gets every thing thrown at her. There is "masterful planning" and then there is "Plot Armor 10" for being the main villain.