Loving it actually. Can't wait for the rest of the story. Thank you.

Really nice fic, i have seen very few ME fics that practically skips the "mission" scenes, keep it Up 3.
the part when Miranda says i love you is like "insert meme" that escalated quickly

This is actually very well-written. I like that short part about Joker in his apartment, big ups on that.
Keep up the good work!

As frustrating as it has been at times, the payoff was well worth reading this far. Overall a great story, even if some of the perspective changes weren't really necessary.

yay Miranda and Shepard are together at last. hopefully they stay together

Excellent chapter. Glad Miranda and Shepard are together again. Please continue.

Excellent chapter. Glad both finally decided to fix the relationship. Big step for Miranda.

wow nice chapter hopefully Miranda and Shepard can sort their issues out and either become lovers or just good friends

Great chapter. Looking forward to reading about Samara's loyalty mission. Please continue.

Wonderful chapter. Looking forward to more.

Excellent chapter, great job.

I seriously want to smack the back of Miranda's head but I feel like I'd just get hit with a biotic slam for even trying, this chapter was sad but beautiful to read...

Shepard has broken many hearts, well I think it will do her some good to have hers broken to see what it is like. And not wanting to even be friends? Wonder how Shepard were to feel about that if Miranda decides to disappear without telling her(like get off on Illium without saying why or what she was doing and end up kidnapped because of it...might make an interesting twist to see how Shepard reacts since she decided to not even be friends anymore).

Would also like to see more of how Miranda is dealing with this no friendship anymore thing...like ignoring Shepard completely, going back to the cold facade, perhaps even colder than before etc.

Oooh! A new twist! Can't wait to see how this one plays out!

Ugh the cliffhangers! Lol. I have to say I've read a lot of Miranda and Femshep romance fanfic more than I care to admit lol this has to be by far one of my favorites if not my favorite! Keep it up absolutely enthralling story telling :). I never thought I'd want to hit two fictional characters more in my life haha. Can not wait for the next chapter! Love it!