Reviews for A Near Miss
SixUnderOneXSix chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
This is amazing and if I could give it more favourites I would. You captured the torture and the sadness just as well as you did the relief and the happiness. Nice work.
annastronaut chapter 1 . 6/2/2018
Oh my gosh, I love this! It's so sweet and touching and makes my heart ache in a good way at the same time.
PetaZedrok chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
Great story.
RebelliousWaffle chapter 1 . 5/31/2018
Aww! You pulled this off really, really well.
springfieldbluebird chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
Ooh! You wrote a heart-rending story here. The way you described it, I could totally see Sabine's struggle on how to tell Jacen his mom is dead. I've said it before and I'll say it again, you have a really good grasp on how to write little children. Your Jacen is just adorable. Bravo! (I've read so many of GondalsQueen's fics too...she's so awesome...)
ruby throne chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
"Hera laughed and then they laughed together because it wasn't funny " I can second this feeling and I loved the whole story.
Sabine had a great responsibility to face and it showed in every reaction of hers
Kgirl1 chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
I don't know if I'm smiling with joy or sobbing my heart out. Just reading the summary of this one terrified me! But Hera's entrance was perfect, Sabine's gleeful childish relationship with Jacen was perfect, the Hera/Sabine bonding was perfect... love love love this. :)
Guest101 chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
It was nice to see those cracks in Sabine's mental walls. Granted, she's come a long way since joining the ghost, but she's not completely open either. This was a cool glimpse of her inner thoughts and feelings and how much she cares for Hera and Jacen. Keep writing!
WestwardGlance chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Very nice! Quite a bit of angst you flirted with there. I know you would never kill Hera but sheesh, I was worried she was ACTUALLY going to tell Jacen his mother had died...

Loved the implications that Sabine used Ezra as a patsy. I read that and thought, "yeah that felt about right..." lol
RagnarDanneskjold chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
You finished it :) I love the new additions. It flows well. You should be proud of this one.