Chapter 4 really needs its own story. I really preferred your version anyway. I hope there’s more

Why didn't you make this its own fic? Just wondering.

Such a concept, well done.

I would like to see more stories like this. The concept is good.

You did my story justice

Twistes but a good read

beryl won means that usagi and the scouts will have to fight her, Queen Metallia, the generals, and endymion. Is beryl going to be taking over the world & universe? how is usagi going to fight them especially endymion. In the other story written by chachingmel12 beryl gets mamoru to marry him. at the end of her story it seemed that endymion knew the scouts when they went to the wedding because he had a tear.

Good start hope you continue.

i read the original story. i really wish beryl didn't win