really liked it! :)

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Awwww! I Love It! Amazing Job!

Aww! I love this! It's so cute! I love the Pidge/Lance bonding. You have really great writing, I was hooked from the first line. The way you mix up sentence lengths and structure is great! And I love the way you slipped in Lance's thoughts to give it that 1st person POV character commentary feel that lead to the great humor while still keeping all the 3rd person POV benefits. I love it when people do that, and you did it really well! I think that's the best kind of POV. I loved it! Make sure you keep writing!