please ignore my comment it got posted here too for some reason

Shame that your fics become, all the same, meaning "insert female character that takes protagonist role is a pervert and is lesbian" not to mention have over 100 or close to 100 storys, this is self wouldn't be a problem but they mostly the same, its bascisly one story version 1 or 2 or 3 and so on (problem with this is there is nothing new or interesting in your fics anymore).Sorry if my comment hurt you in any way but that's how i feel
Wish you good luck with your story's

Pain17: Mito is safe from becoming a Hollow...for now.

Me: ...uhhh...if she has yet to turn into a Hollow even after 20 years (she died when Kushina was a teen and even then she was nearing 100!), then there is no way she'll turn now.

Keep up the good work! Really interesting

great xover fic. cant wait to read more wonder if naruto and nel get together would be cool. wonder what kisuke does next rate the fic a 9 of 10. :):):)

Stay safe nya

This is a great story so far. I appreciate h That you haven’t made Naruto OP too early. I would like to see more Jiraiya teach him more toad techniques, as both the anime and most fanfics don’t explore those much. It’s great that Naruto is very distinct power wise from the bleach characters. I hope you keep it this way and develop him as a Shinobi instead of giving him a Zanpakto. The relationship with Nel is moving at a realistic pace, and it really adds some nice fluff in between the serious stuff.

What you said at the end is very true and not just this fanfic website but others like hope to keep the mood just right and shows that everyone is trying their best to get thought those dark times even poeple on YouTube make videos to help bring happiness to all that watch or a laugh just every fanfic writer tries to do. (•ᴗ•) Into next story or chapter witch other comes first have a nice day/night hope you are having fun with what you are doing.

This is a great chapter! I'm thinking that Naruto's secrets are being given up perhaps a little too much, but eh. I love Naruto's little talk with Nelliel, as well as the look into the Bleach world.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

Great chapter. Yeah, this year has been very bad for my family. I wish you and others well as well. Take care.

Great chapter. I thought he wouldve made it in time though considering they made it quicker.

I really look forward to more chapters. Unfortunate theres only one more. One question is though his relationship with Hinata. Did he build one in secret to continue with his mask. I sincerely hope he did. It would be utter bull for him to leave such a girl alone with her care for him and all shes been through with his personality as long as hes aware of her.

Ah the potential for a Shinigami Mito and Mikoto powerhouse allies. Something he needs now that hes hot hollows to worry about alongside the akatsuki and can find himself ambushed by one group after fighting the other thanks to the likely power being thrown around.

He definitely needs allies.

Heres hoping he introduces Nel to Mito soon and they figure out a way to free her and have her fight and travel along side him.

In confused. What happened to the 100 years difference? Which was shown by the guy going from un-numbered to numbered. There was only a very short time that passed for Naruto in between Nel and the hollows showing.

Just to clarify my previous comment I meant that all shinobi at the very least of a certain chakra level I think should be able to see spirits and that they dont because the world possibly due to the chakra heavy richness doesnt have spirits lingering around. They pass automatically. Though this one seems you have to be "death touched" though Naruto was around Haku and Zabuzas corpse from death to burial without seeing one so idk. Unless they passed on right away.

Though I feel that the spiritual energy of their chakra should be considered the same I still like this version and the setup.

I hope that with Mito and Nel meeting eachother they can help eachother with Mito becoming more and being free and of course Nel healing and getting stronger.

One thing though. I couldve sworn that little shit attacked Nel from behind because he hated her and she refused to fight him again with him always losing and not learning anything she tried to teach him as a person. While this story says she fought him and lost.