In all honestly, this is a really good story and I’m happy with where it has gone. You did a really good job of developing two characters and adding another would just cheepen that.
Hope you keep updating.

I’m happy with just Loki. Hope you keep updating.

I like where this went.

I love this story. There are so few good Campione or Danmachi stories

Please don't tell me you're dropping this :(

I didn't notice the author note until now so my bad but since I fit the requirement I guess I will review since I normally don't ever review. Yes I'm female and I'm enjoying this fic, I'm not the best at reviewing or giving critiques though.

I've read most of the campione series and watched the anime so I know what campione is like especially in the novels with them kissing scenes.

I honestly enjoy this fic and it's a great crossover. I also liked the back story for freyja, was tad abrupt and different but ya wrote it in a manner that indicated that it was going to be different. As danmachi novel hasn't made any new progress its hard to write about chars with lack of background plot details.

Though the title of the fic did state harem I understand your sentiments and honestly agree that a harem is practically impossible at this point, maybe change the title of the fic? For me I mainly enjoy Godou's interaction with the workers of the hostess and of course the rest of the chars in danmachi. Personally I want Lancelot around more lol.

I'm just here to read something that is well written and tagging along to see where this story will end up. And so I implore ya to keep writing and hope you don't abandon this fic.

Honestly don't worry about it not being a harem fic, at this point in it would feel forced anyway

I liked the story an how it evolved over time...a single love story is always more appealing an believable...most harem story’s are just sex fest that usually never give a compelling story. I liked how you built Loki up in to a person not just “ oh I love him an then sex scene”. As far as fraya’s back story I like it an it changed the story up for a bit...keep up the good work! Update soon!

Wow, you're a massive cunt. Have the common decency to at least put a disclaimer in about the lack of a harem, don't try to bait new readers in with the promise of it. You swindled your reader base from among the people you despise, fucking stop it.

To all you retards defending this dipshit of an author. Go to Spacebattles and read his 'insightful' comments towards his readers so you can marvel at how much respect this piece of shit has for you fuckers.

Screw the haters.
This story is, admittedly, not what I was expecting when I started it. But I also wasn't expecting more cheesecake than is standard for Campione, so until I read this chapter/AN I was figuring it was probably just going to be a 'slow burn.'
That said, I have thoroughly enjoyed it this far, and I'm looking forward to the next update.
Followed and Favorited.

"Do not go gentle."

I don't know about anyone else, but I'm enjoying the direction this is going and am incredibly interested in this new backstory for Freya.

I like that the story isn’t a harem yet (or at all), Loki is an awesome character

Moral high ground, eh? Nice try, Paul. Nice try indeed.

But there's just two glaring problems there. You wanna know what?

We saw through your fake apology. Your lies. The only reason why you lashed out is because of your general bad decisions in story telling and heart of glass.

You never had a solid foundation for a story's flow to begin with. That one mistake made the story's structure uneven. You desperately wanted to keep the structure up, but with no proper blueprint to begin with, it ended up becoming worse and worse.

People criticize and due to your fragile feeling, you lashed out under the pretense of a "no harem" moral.

Guess what? We don't care if it's monogamous or polygamous. We want to see how the characters handle that sort of a drama and how it would either succeed or failed. We already saw the dysfunctional, yet surprisingly sweet relationships between Shirou, Rin, and Saber or Shirou, Sakura and Rider depending on the route.

We accept the outcome of their relationships because of the history behind them. Because Nasu managed to write them with PROPER PLANNING.

And people insults you. Paul, this is the internet. Anybody has free reign to do anything here. And some of those insults had some merit.

Still can't take insults/criticism? Then go back to your precious Spacebattle.

Does that mean Bell will just be with Hestia if the harem thing isn't happening