Take your time my dude, don’t rush take your time. When you feel it’s ready, we’re ready to read it.

Please update! This is so gods damned good! I want more! So uh yeah. Please update...

This is a great story really hope you continue it

Monsters have BLACK ichor, not golden.

keep updating this!

Damn shame about that writers block. This is a good piece of work.

This story is amazing I've read a lot of stories this past year and I've got to say that this definitively one of tue best. Please continue this story.

there's a lot of grammar mistakes in this chapter

Another betrayal fic
For God's sake can't the authors be original, or use the slightest hint of logic and not make everyone extremely OOC? Why the fuck is poseidon annoyed with his greatest pride and Joy? Why are the campers this way to their savior who has loyalty as fatal flaw
Like come on, at least make shit logical even a slight bit instead of following the same old trajectory

Please up date

and that's where u got mepercy is still the same man bullshit my ass must be on fire if that's the case. if you change the character but then say yes still the same. good riddance

interesting.

interesting start

I really like this story, it's really interesting.

If this is going to be a good Percy where he forgives his dad and Zeus and all, then please warn me. I would only like to read where he takes revenge from everyone who betrayed him no matter the cause. I don't want it to watch him forgive everyone even after everything they did so please telle if he's gonna forgive his dad or anyone else who betrayed him...