I honestly find this story a lil too much tbh... that’s actually a really bad description of how I feel but it’s just as a reader, I don’t feel any connection to the characters... what I mean is that although it’s a really good idea and plot, i really get where ur coming from with this story... Meiko is too op and too far away for us to truly grasp her character and being. We need more dialogue that’s more funny and more quirky in order to really connect with them. For example, in the beginning when she was literally only like 1-6 years old, you could talk about her relationship with her dad more. Make her more of a loving child and have more like dad jokes? Idk something funny because all I’m reading is angst and it’s super boring (no offence) to read over 7 chapters of straight up meiko being able to ‘miraculously’ tell the past and future and her automatically be super overwhelming. Your writing is super good and that’s the main reason why I keep trying to come back to this story but I don’t feel anything with them. You can probably keep this angst stuff but when the three really start to enter in class 1-A, I suggest adding Iida’s funny moments and her being able to laugh and joke freely without too much depression and pain...

Sorry for such a long review but I really wanted to get this out because it’s a great idea and I think if you can tweak a few things the story would be so much better!

Great visuals with the pencil sketch filter! I get an interesting, defined picture when that is described to me. I'm concerned about Meiko having too many superpowers, hovering on the edge of Mary-Sue status, even if she technically still has only one quirk. You put some decent limiters [just be sure that they hold up and she doesn't learn to do too much too fast] and early stuff of being smart and learning multiple languages were alleviated by her retaining her knowledge of a past life rather than being automatically good, so that helps a little. I like the superhero reference to Venom & Carnage. Curious to read more.

What an interesting new take on the basic OC self insert. Good narration as well, an unexpected bonus. Let's see how this progresses.

I am a reader that just happened to stumble upon your masterpiece! I freaking LOVE your story and how you’ve gone about the butterfly effects, moral compass with knowing things that Could be prevented but at a serious cost- your creativity is extremely refreshing and a breath of fresh air like no other. Seriously, keep up the good work and take your time with this art because it’s makes it all the more enjoyable.

Your writing is magnificent. I like how you're able to convey the emotions of your OCs and bring them alive. I took a chance by searching for Fumikage fanfics because I was reaaally curious and I love his love for all things darkness and I was pleasantly surprised to find this story.

I think Rin should definitely continue to tear Katsuki down a few pegs and I love the idea of Shinso actually getting into the Hero course.

I AM PREPARED TO SUFFER

You literally dipped us in an ocean of Meta! XD

Dammit jumbyxjenkins! I don't know who you are but you made me laugh and cry so far with your story! Good stuff man! If you haven't given up yet, I hope you eventually continue the fanfic.

I usually don't like it when inserts reveal they're reincarnated, but idk it doesn't feel too out of place here. it's not jarring and annoying and its also not revealing too much of the future.

side note: couldn't be more disappointed not to see invisible removed from the class. she hasn't showed up in the story but just knowing she somewhere off in the background being a literal waste of space is still upsetting.

oh pls tell you you got rid of invisible girl, her abilities shouldn't have got her passed of tests in the physical aspect. pretty much completely useless.

I'm still waiting for the character if she ever turns villian but seeing this I'm guessing she will be a hero instead, Welp nothing can be done then, than just ...

Holy moly i just binge this all during class and night lol

Keep it up dear writter, i just wish i can post my own story but language barrier man, i can even write proper grammar or find beta reader or even editor coz my friends and i now in final semester

please update! i feel like you're kokei horikoshi with the cliffhangers agggghhh

Brilliant plot by the way

Is it bad that I just realized that you made them a family of cripples? Eraserhead is even the insomniac/narcoleptic uncle...

Oh man oh man I am so excited to see more of this fic eventually! I love warcraft and seeing a demon hunter inspired character in BNHA? Fuckin' NOICE. And that her intended romance is Tokoyami, my favourite birdie boi who tries to be super edgy, but is actually a dork? *chef kiss* delicious