Yeeeee amazing

THAT WAS HILARIOUS! I LOVE THAT ENDING, THIS IS AWESOME!

"You wouldn't happen to have $1,500 worth of bail money, would you?" THAT'S PERFECT.

This was hilarious, and I did NOT expect that Ray was an undercover policeman, that was a really good idea! Man, Mr. Krabs is gonna kill Pearl for this, the bail money...eesh. XD. I've loved this little story, great job! Can't wait for what you do next! :)

Good story.

Of course he wouldn't listen to SpongeBob, just like he didn't with the mud puddle. Lol, gotta love that adorable and sneaky little troublemaker.

Oh boy, Gary's gonna be in HUGE trouble! I have a feeling Spongebob's going to be right, and that something bad's going to happen at the party. But Judy, Orchid and Pearl wouldn't pull a trick on poor Gary, would they? I DON'T KNOW! XD

I like how you gave he teens individual personalities a bit more, Orchid seems to be a bit different than Judy, what with the new hairstyle and liking old music. I liked how you put some description in the beginning! Can't wait to see the next chapter!

CUTE! I love Vary! You write him SO well, and I love having him as the protagonist of this story! Oh, and the ‘one terrible idea later’ part was EPIC. I love Spongebob appearing in a thought bubble, XD. Can’t wait for the next one!