Reviews for Naruto: The Holy Sword Mercenary
Guest 8 chapter 2 . 1/7
Have Minato realize Naruto has the Uzuamaki stubbornness.

Naruto told his sisters that they are Demons only infront of Minato & Kushina.

Kushina realize what cause this.

Yugito Nii have to prove to Naruto that she actually care for him not due to a contract that he didn’t signed off on.
Guest 8 chapter 2 . 1/5
Minato found out that Naruto refuse the arrangement cause of him. Minato decided for the good of Konoha he has to died to make Naruto married Yugito Nii.
Unbeknownst to Minato Naruto is secretly the new leader of Akatsuki. He was the one who started the civil war in kirigakure.
Guest 8 chapter 2 . 1/5
Have Naruto make his way to Uzugakure. Making it his own clan their. He married only people who hurts his siblings and his parents.
Guest 8 chapter 2 . 1/5
Yugito nii meets Naruto but doesn’t go well as she hopes.

Naruto rather go out with Kurotsuchi the granddaughter of Third Tsuchikage.
Guest 8 chapter 2 . 1/5
Yugito Nii met Naruto. Naruto said if you want me to be your husband. You have to killed Minato Namikaze & Kushina Uzumaki.

Fourth Raikage asked why.
Naruto told him that Minato didn’t want me to become a ninja why he let my younger sisters become the heirs to both Uzumaki & Namikaze Clan Heads.

Fourth Raikage told Naruto that Minato told him that Minato trained him.
Onishin Tsukitenshi chapter 2 . 11/14/2019
Only real issue with the story is Refithea's speech pattern. She's talking like a regular person in this story, but canon-wise she speaks in third person half the time and calls herself Reffy. Not to mention you're having her act a lot more mature. Also, you probably should have mentioned that Alec was going to be genderbent into a girl. Other than that, I hope you update this story soon.
Alter-Red chapter 2 . 5/13/2019
Awesome story dude. Didn't think there would be a Brown Dust fiction. Nice start, can't wait how you would go with this.
Shirou Emiya1 chapter 2 . 5/12/2019
Isnt alec a guy in brown dust? Why is he female in this fic?
TechnoGalen chapter 1 . 5/11/2019
Kishimoto trash.
kurokitsune028 chapter 2 . 5/11/2019
Yes! Confrontation in wave! I can't wait to read what happens
BigBoySpartan chapter 2 . 5/11/2019
Great chapter looking forward to more
BigBoySpartan chapter 1 . 5/11/2019
Great start looking forward to more
Autismguy593 chapter 2 . 5/11/2019
Keep up the good work, have Minato regret his mistakes and have his family regret it as well. Also Honoka especially because she will finally realize being heir isn't that great.
zero fullbuster chapter 2 . 5/11/2019
Love it.
Please write more.
Skull Flame chapter 1 . 5/6/2019
Interesting beginning. I'll be waiting to see where this goes.
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