Reviews for Hermione's Summer of Conquest
thunderofdeath97 chapter 7 . 7/20
honestly i thought with hermione forcing purebloods to submit to her, that there would be more purebloods like narcissa, belllatrix, andromeda, the greengrasses, mother and daughters, just to name a few.
red demon161 chapter 7 . 7/18
Nice to see this one updated and completed. With some future update too. Hermione got Penny and Harry gets Luna and Ginny in addition to Fleur. I love that like Fleur Luna and Ginny got fitted with control collars. I do hope Harry is making one for Cho. :)

Doesn't Harry also have Gabrielle? I remember her telling Harry she would submit to him.
Yaw6113 chapter 6 . 2/8
Please have Harry make Pansy into a slut. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.
red demon161 chapter 6 . 2/7
Very nice. Good to see Penny come on by. It looks like Harry has some experience with her at a club. It was also nice to hear form Gabby. I know Harry isn't so sure about Gabby but I think it will work out. He's got a year to work out a plan to train her up so he doesn't have to go to war with her.

So we might see the Greengrass sisters with Daphne going to Hermione. I assume Astoria will go to Harry. Hehe just thought of something with Pansy.
Harry: Pansy was such a pain in the ass at school. I'd like to give her a pain in the ass.
red demon161 chapter 5 . 10/21/2019
I'm glad Harry seems to appreciate Hermione, she's scary. It's a good thing she's on his side. Hermione is training her girls well.
Gabriel Herrol chapter 4 . 7/2/2019
Wow, now that's new. Harry is loaning Fleur's body in exchange of favors? And she is okay with that? I mean, usually you say that Harry don't share his girls with other men, only with his other girls. Backroom deals are what they are, but it is still surprising. Good chapter though. :)
red demon161 chapter 4 . 7/1/2019
Oh ho talk about a hot chapter. I loved Hermione's training that she put the Patel's through. I also liked her showing the girls off to Harry, look like he can't wait to take the girls for a spin.

I think the only that would of been better is if Harry and Hermione compare notes on how to train a girl. The Twins show Harry their plugs and Harry would go: "Nice though I would of started them off on a bigger plug they can take it. Just ask Fleur you would be surprised at what she can take back there."

Hermione wants to get Cho so she can give her to Harry. What a great friend. Hermione just knows what to give Harry. That would be a great birthday gift. Harry comes home to find a box on his bed. Opens it to find Cho trussed up and gagged. A note from Hermione taped to Cho's head. :)
olisully chapter 1 . 7/1/2019
oh my god this is amazing and I love it and I can't read it all right now but in the penultimate paragraph of the primary chapter the sentence doesn't quite fit I don't think but I may just be being a poo, either way I love your writing, it's amazing and I love it
Starway Man chapter 4 . 6/30/2019
I loved the 'leetle boy' thing at the start, that particular reference always cracks me up. :) So did all the 'Mistress' and 'Pretty Girl' references too, to be honest! And yeah, Hermione *is* an evil (boss) witch in this story. :) Hope to see more of your work soon!
red demon161 chapter 3 . 5/29/2019
Nice. I love the way Hermione is training the twins. She's fisted them in both holes and put plugs in them. I liked Hermione's little worry that Harry might try to steal her girl.

Looks like Gabrielle is going to join with her sister. Harry will have sisters. With Gabby not a natural submissive Harry going to have to try her up hehe.
Araytigre chapter 2 . 5/26/2019
Well done, a fine acquisition for Hermione, and her new Toys are performing admirably as they learn their new roles in life. With the twins under the Potter banner, the Patil Family will prosper much more due to that protection. Thank You. TTFN
Weary Curmudgeon chapter 2 . 5/25/2019
Corrections:

*Her pet and Harry's had become very comfortable enjoying each other while they watched over the last day or so.*

Commas after "other" and "watched".

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Comments:

- Jewelled Disk
Noticed the "Portkey" and can't shake the feeling that each gem will represent a P.B. Witch taken as concubine.

Meaning that it'll end up with more gems, although why Agatha wasn't added I have no idea.

Control mechanism maybe (and it turns out it is) and her not needing it due to her "natural" sub tendencies? (A con to that idea is the pleasure function that could be utilized on her, or is the disk merely a training tool? Not enough data thus far to tell.)

The idea of a Coven of sorts also comes to mind, with Hermione in the position of the Warlock and being able to tap into their magic through it.

Lastly, it's possible if unlikely that this is/was an ancient test by the Dagworth-Grangers for readmittance to the House for those descended from cast out Squibs.

And with the House currently listed as extinct/defunct, this being the only way to revive it.

Why?

Another seat on the Geezergamot possibly.
*shrugs*

- Lady Potter
Hermione is thinking like a Witch, not a Lesbian hailing from the Mundane world.

In vitro fertilization is a thing. Not as much fun for Harry, but it also doesn't force Hermione into something she doesn't feel comfortable with, which is something that would matter to Harry.

*shrugs*

- Pairings
It's still completely unclear to me why the Twins were on The List for "acquisition".

Yes, they're pretty
Yes, they:re Pure Bloods.

So are Luna and Ginny and they're not on The List.

The rest were reasonably clear/easy to figure out.

Dislike on Hermione's part or possible bigotry, which kicks in reason 1 again.

Yet based on this chapter, as well as canon. She's gotten along with them and likes them. Which is why their "purchase" is a bit baffling as they don't seem to fit the pattern.

I'm probably overlooking something simple.
red demon161 chapter 2 . 5/24/2019
Excellent as always. Loved the chokers Hermione fitted to the twins with. I hope Harry will fit Fleur with a collar the does the same. I loved how Hermione handled the twins. Those two had no idea what was waiting for them.

I loved the mention of Harry sending Fleur to calm Hermione down. I can imagine it. Harry trying to sleep but keeps hearing Hermione pacing and muttering to herself. Harry shoves Fleur off the bed and tells her to go pleasure Hermione and don't come back until she is passed out. :)
Gabriel Herrol chapter 2 . 5/23/2019
OK, the concept of Harry and Hermione sharing their girls with each others is quite hot. Love the naked rule by the way. Even if Harry don't have the permission to touch them yet, eye candy is eye candy. And also Hermione is very pragmatic, thinking about using her girls to get her ready to have sex with Harry if necessary for him to have an heir for the Potter line young and not having wives yet. Next time they shouldn't worry about privacy. If Harry or Hermione want their girls some place in the house, they just have to strip or adjust the fabrics and go at it. Even if Harry and Hermione don't touch each others, the sight of the others having fun should be quite the motivation factor. XD
Araytigre chapter 1 . 5/21/2019
Another Fun one in the offing! It will be fun to discover Hermione's agenda concerning the people that she has Narcissa investigating, as well as what Harry's plans are too. Nice touch with the Beheadings, in "The Tower", and with HRM's blessing at that. Thank You. TTFN
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