Reviews for A Most Unlikely Lancer
Sprengkamp chapter 4 . 6/9
Th for the chapter
Blu3b3rryT3a chapter 4 . 5/11
Lol, love Naruko (she scares the other Servants silly, doesn't she?) despite having only one arm and not even using her Noble Phantasm yet!
Yes, despair other Servants! Your doom has come in the form of a gender-bent Naruto, mwa ha ha ha ha ha!
Can't wait for Gil or Medea to met Naruko, that's gonna be a blast~!
Were they arm wrestling in this chapter? Just want to clarify, since I sometimes don't pick up all the details.
Best of luck out there, take your time writing!
Tin chapter 2 . 5/11
Please update more
Tin chapter 1 . 5/11
I like this story, more update please.
lmc9389 chapter 4 . 4/26
Haha that’s funny
Tin chapter 1 . 4/22
More update please...
Just4fun23000 chapter 1 . 4/21
First off this is probably a good, well-written story but I can't read all the way through the first chapter.

is just something I can't stomach, never could for that matter.

There are many good stories out there, i don't doubt that for a second, but I never could read a single one of them, don't know why.

Still keep on doing what you do best, and good luck.
SOPV chapter 1 . 4/17
This is a pretty good story man, Keep up that good work! Nice bits of comedy too.
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 4 . 4/9
:)
Tin chapter 1 . 3/31
Update...
Hail Lord Archanfel chapter 4 . 3/31
That’s how you win a Grail War. Arm wrestling contest!
Tin chapter 1 . 3/30
I hope next chapter bit more long thank you..
Guest chapter 4 . 3/28
Genial ahora esperemos 6 meses más para la próxima actualización de esta historia XD.
Lobisomen616 chapter 4 . 3/26
Ah, this is refreshing...

Thanks for the gag chapter. Looking forward to reading the next chapter within a reasonable timeframe now that life has taken a break from sucking out my soul, but Lord knows that won't last.

Still, thanks NZ. Keep up the good work.
kuramathetranscened chapter 4 . 3/26
Nice chapter. Fun quick read. Ignore everyone complaining about you being behind they are just a bunch of assholes. Also, Fever and no energy if it hit you all at once I would say you have the Flu but, I think you should have a few more symptoms than just those. Remember Flu hits you all at once cold starts as sniffles and grows. Please keep up the great work and make sure to take care of yourself.
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