Reviews for Fractured Mind |
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![]() ![]() Please Update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thankfully, Loki’s awake. Can he actually recover? What will happen next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least Loki’s getting some help. He sure needs it. Good medical accuracy (I think). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, dear. Loki’s having a rough time. How did he escape? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do love a good Loki!whump. It’s an interesting concept. What will Thor and the Avengers think of this? |
![]() ![]() Please don't stop. I like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story eagerly waiting for the next chapter. dont leave a person waiting like this |
![]() ![]() This is very interesting! I can’t wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to the next update |
![]() ![]() Excellent story. Poor Loki. |
![]() ![]() And why exactly did you stop writing? This is amazing! |
![]() ![]() please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story. Can you please write quicker? I NEED to read more ASAP. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Story is so great! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I have to say, at first, I was a little dubious about this fic. I really wanted to read at least 2 or 3 chapters before having a hint of where it's going. It's quite a frequent trope in stories about Loki that he suddenly appears before the Avengers after having been detained by Thanos, so I was kind of thinking "yeeeeaaaah I don't knoooooow". But obviously, if I had just stopped there, I wouldn't be here, would I? Your story has something different, and if I have to name it, I think it's attention to detail. Your descriptions are really, really good, you write enough to give a very clear picture of the scene to the reader, and yet not too much, not to lose him into a maze of unecessary details. I'm thinking about, for example, Tony's growing uneasiness-then-panic when he discovers that there's someone in his lab, or the preparation for surgery at the end of the last chapter (and by the way, I know I'm easy to impress because I know next to nothing about this area, but damn, for such a situation, that was pretty realistic to me!). So yeah, your writing style is very good, and it caught my attention, so I really look forward to reading chapter 4 now! Thank you for this story! |