Reviews for Fractured Mind
AnonymousMe chapter 6 . 4/22
Please Update!
GliderPilot chapter 4 . 4/14
Thankfully, Loki’s awake. Can he actually recover? What will happen next?
GliderPilot chapter 3 . 4/14
At least Loki’s getting some help. He sure needs it. Good medical accuracy (I think).
GliderPilot chapter 2 . 4/13
Oh, dear. Loki’s having a rough time. How did he escape?
GliderPilot chapter 1 . 4/13
I do love a good Loki!whump. It’s an interesting concept. What will Thor and the Avengers think of this?
K chapter 5 . 12/28/2019
Please don't stop. I like this.
Aeon225 chapter 5 . 12/19/2019
good story eagerly waiting for the next chapter. dont leave a person waiting like this
Guest chapter 5 . 11/27/2019
This is very interesting! I can’t wait for more!
SunshineBubbles chapter 5 . 11/25/2019
Looking forward to the next update
Anne chapter 5 . 11/19/2019
Excellent story. Poor Loki.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27/2019
And why exactly did you stop writing? This is amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2019
please update soon
OtherworldlyStarlight chapter 4 . 10/8/2019
I love your story. Can you please write quicker? I NEED to read more ASAP.
EpicHitsugaya chapter 3 . 10/5/2019
Story is so great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
AkiraRedtiger chapter 3 . 9/18/2019
Hello!

I have to say, at first, I was a little dubious about this fic. I really wanted to read at least 2 or 3 chapters before having a hint of where it's going. It's quite a frequent trope in stories about Loki that he suddenly appears before the Avengers after having been detained by Thanos, so I was kind of thinking "yeeeeaaaah I don't knoooooow".

But obviously, if I had just stopped there, I wouldn't be here, would I?

Your story has something different, and if I have to name it, I think it's attention to detail. Your descriptions are really, really good, you write enough to give a very clear picture of the scene to the reader, and yet not too much, not to lose him into a maze of unecessary details. I'm thinking about, for example, Tony's growing uneasiness-then-panic when he discovers that there's someone in his lab, or the preparation for surgery at the end of the last chapter (and by the way, I know I'm easy to impress because I know next to nothing about this area, but damn, for such a situation, that was pretty realistic to me!). So yeah, your writing style is very good, and it caught my attention, so I really look forward to reading chapter 4 now!

Thank you for this story!
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