| Reviews for Bella's First Day |
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   gingerhat chapter 1 . 12/3/2019 Going. In. The. Archives. :D Holy cow... I almost wet myself! That was hysterical - 'murmurs murmuringly' and the lunch lady saying, "That bitch!" really got me. Those and many, many more. You really nailed so many of the cliches and the absurdity that it resonated in nearly every line. I want to quote this like the 'Princess Bride' and I'd give a limb to see the entire cafeteria come to their feet, gasp, and announce Tanya's entrance. :D :D :D BRAVA! |
| biblepam chapter 1 . 11/26/2019 I read this when it was posted for the concert and it was great and hysterical. Great job, girlie. |
| tff000 chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 good |
| edaddict3254 chapter 1 . 11/2/2019 OMG, that was epic! Lmao, brilliant! |
| TwiFanfictionRecs.com chapter 1 . 11/2/2019 Bella's First Day has been voted in the Top 10 fics completed in September by visitors of www . twifanfictionrecs . com |
| NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 10/16/2019 OMG! I'm dying over this! lol ;) |
| NKubie chapter 1 . 10/13/2019 That is one funny crack-fic! xo Nan |
| dpennell007 chapter 1 . 10/13/2019 It looks like SOMEONE has been doing as much fic reading as I have. lol. I passed on reading the entries for this contest, but yours was so funny, I read a few of the others. This one was my favorite. |
| catch a cannonball chapter 1 . 10/6/2019 "he said edwardly" and "I don't know but she's a bitch" may be the two greatest lines of fic I've ever read. |
| shouldbecleaning chapter 1 . 10/5/2019 Best dialogue tags in the entire written world. I bow before you. |
| TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 10/5/2019 Bella's First Day has been nominated in the poll to find the Top 10 fics completed in September at www . twifanfictionrecs . com |
| Cina's chapter 1 . 9/30/2019 Loved it |
| Carla Gasperoni chapter 1 . 9/29/2019 So hilarious! This made me crack up! Great job AS ALWAYS! |
| ohtobeyoung chapter 1 . 9/26/2019 So very happy you came out of "retirement' to write this. I absolutely loved it. Couldn't stop laughing. Sat on the edge of my seat wondering what you were going to pull next. WOW! Wishing it wasn'yot a one-shot and that there was more. Thanks, Denise. Jan |
| maniacalmuse chapter 1 . 9/26/2019 So funny in the cringiest of ways! I love how super exaggerated everyone's personality traits are. "Edwardly" might be my most favourite adverb ever. Thanks for writing and entering the contest, and congratulations on your wins! XO |
