This story is awesome! Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story! While, yes, there are grammar mistakes and some errors, the plot and dialogue is something to enjoy reading and looking forward too. Thank you so much, and bless you. Your an amazing writer, the story is so much fun and it’s inspired me to write even better and more. Thank you!

I'm sorry to hear about your family passing. You come first, so take as much time as you need to.

Your story is wonderful by the way. I love the way you've portrayed Senritsu, and I love all her interactions with everyone so far. She may be a coward, but are you really a coward if, even though you're scared, you'd stand and fight? I do love her, and the canon Zenitsu too.

It's sad that she has such deep-rooted self-esteem issues, but hopefully she'll accept that she's loved and that people think she's wonderful and beautiful in time.

I have come back and read this story around 3 times now, my favourite interactions so far have to be between her and her brothers. But I like how she's making an impact on so many people already!

I hope you're doing okay. Stay safe.

First of all: my condolences. Take all the time you need to mourn. What’s important is for you to take care of yourself, physically and mentally. I hope you feel better one day. It’s difficult, the pain will be always there, but it gets manageable with time.

About the chapter, I love this story, honestly. The grammar errors and misspellings can be easily fixed. This story is incredible, Senritsu is a lovable person, charismatic, kind and loyal. I hate how she sees herself, especially because that negativity is not her at all. She’s an incredible human being!

I love her relationship with her Jijis and her boys! I am kind of dying to see how her relationship with Oyakata-sama will be. Kurotsuchi already must have relayed some opinions on Zen to his master; Mui-chan also spoken of his beloved friend... Mei-nii also likes his darling friend. Oayakata-sama is probably curious about the boy/girl his “children” are always mentioning.

By the way, I kind of expected Sen to say something like this: “I was struck by lightning. Now I am the fastest man alive. I am... The Flash.” Lol that would have been hilarious!

I also like the idea of a very oblivious Sen. I mean, she’s physically beautiful, her heart is big and she’s kind and very easy to love. People flock to her like moths to a flame. They want to be loved and cared for by her. So, when they compliment her, she would usually misinterpret it by assuming they were just being kind. Her poor future suitors will suffer A LOT. I am not even getting started with her protective brothers and grandpas.

I wonder how will her relationship with Tanjirou and Inosuke be like.

Thanks for the new chapter. Update when you feel better.

Well, Kai is going all wrong about the crush thing.

Senritsu is so adorable and full of love.
I would love to know how a meeting between her and Oyakata-sama would go. She should totally give the poor man a heartfelt hug.
How can people not love that sweet girl?

She’s adorable, sweet, kind, brave, beautiful, smart and fierce. I love her and everyone should love Senritsu, because she’s just so precious.

Those boys have a Sister Complex the size of a mountain.

Ugh! EW! EWWWW! Feelings, ew. Why are they expressing their feelings... couldn't they just, not? Ugh, crying and screaming, ugh, ew, emotions, this is too much for me, I will go meditate and rid myself of this vile sensation.

I think i just had too many mini-heart-attacks on this chp. The fluffiness oh boi... XD

(I really sorry for wht happen with your fam, i hope the rest of you to be fine soon (i am sorry, idk how/wht to said in this situation, my fam kinda like had this rock heart attitude going on so i don’t usually know how to react when news like this hit) also stay healthy, idk with ur side of country u r from but just be carefull and thank you for this wonderfull chp)

I would really love to see what Zenitsu hears other's thoughts. Just imagine someone like Inosuke having thoughts like 'crap that bunny's too adorable' while on the outside he's saying 'let's turn it into stew'.

nicee

Please update again soon! _

Thank you for updating! Please more! _

please uodate

Hmm, I wonder when will you update