I think this is good but it could have a little more than this but still good

so cute

Oh my goodness, this is precious-and perfect writing style for the little guy! I'm pretty sure this is how babies actually think ;)

I really liked this story it fun, short and easy to read. Also it’s good to read before you go to bed

Adorable! I love it! A great portrayal of the scene from the perspective of the child. Definitely enjoyed reading this short piece. It's so sweet. Well done!

That was cute!