|Reviews for Fate: Burning Heaven|
| Guest chapter 3 . 25m
Sweet, cutesy Ruby Rose going around, calling people mongrels. This is hilarious.
| crazy-reader 91 chapter 1 . 7/6
I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
But I doubt that Ruby would be part of a harem, i mean she is the new Queen of Heroes now and I doubt Gil's pride would allow that.
Ruby would idk maybe on a romantic relationship with someone but not in someone's harem or she is in a harem but she's the center of affection.
I wonder how the others from remnant react to RWBYE if they manage to return from Campioneverse Earth, especially with their Nasuverse allies.
Love the story BTW.
| TheChoZenFive chapter 6 . 7/3
I like this alot better than the second God Slaying Blade Works. This is both interesting and well written, while the second GSBW is merely interesting. I just can't get the character interaction in that, though it does have potential. This is really good though and I'm glad you're writing it.
| Firewyrm2 chapter 6 . 7/1
I just had an amazing idea, you could have the Scarlet King from the SCP Mythos be the main antagonist for this or one of your other multi-crossovers. After all, while not much is known about him, he is known to have forcefully subjugated his fellow gods (he may even outclass Great Red in terms of power).
| slyer243 chapter 6 . 7/1
dam! things about to go down and loving the story keep it up. also are yang sides and Blake be human and faunus or are the going to get a blessing or going full campione?(curiosity intensifies)
| Peanutsaber chapter 6 . 7/1
all I can say is that I am very much interested in how you will do the meeting between ruby and shirou. cookies?
| Stilphyell chapter 6 . 6/30
Nice reference to Gilgamesh vs Lancelot on the aerial fight.
I wonder... Will she get some kind of Weapon Mastery Authority to compliment her infinite weapons?
| bloodredmoon22 chapter 6 . 6/30
I wonder want authority she will get from this, I kind of hope she gets something like eternal arms mastery and night of owners that Lancelot from fate zero has. It would complement the gate of Babylon perfectly.
| Lordsunshine64 chapter 6 . 6/30
ooohhhhh... i like this war god! this will be great!
| zahiddreux chapter 6 . 6/30
Well I won't say good chapter because honestly I feel like you just want to make her Stronger and Stronger
What would Mars even do Here in China?
Who's going to come next ? Shiva?Vinshu?Brahman?
Or Even The King Of The End,Goetia,Zurvan or something among this level ?
And no people can't fit in the Vimana of Gilgamesh
Gilgamesh Has all The Mortal Construct Of Humanity
The Vimana is a Divine Construct what Gilgamesh has in Comparison is nothing more than a Fake
The Best exemple would be the [Pushpaka Vimana] authority that The King of The End possess (It's a Vimana the Size of a Whole City)
The "thruth"that Ea show Only work on Humans the Gods are not Weak to Enuma at all(the Gods that we see in Fate are just Divine Spirits at best and At worst they need to use the Body Of A Mortal just to maintain a semblance of themselves on the World)
Ruby wouldn't stand a Chance against many opponents in Both Fate and Campione (Godou Full power in the light Novel can Create a Black Hole its called a Black star
And honestly even with bullshit Enuma Elish And Gilgamesh Can't win Against A Black Hole and his authority of Warrior can Disable Ea and Enkidu thus making Gilgamesh chance of Winning drastically down and Godou Warrior can Counter the Perfect body because it would Deprive Gil of His Divinity and Make him a Mere Mortal and Godou has the Equivalent of Avalon)
Gilgamesh has Everything that Fit two criteria:
It must be Man Made(a Mortal Construct with the only Exception being Ea and Enkidu also the Other Divine Constructs who Appear In Kaleid Illya are just in Kaleid Illya Nasu himself said that it wasn't Part of the Canon or anything but just a Universe of It's Own)
And it must be an Object
Gilgamesh doesn't know how to use any single of the weapons in the Gate
And I have a lot more to say but I'll pass also Mars thanks to his identity as Mordred must have an Extremely Powerful Anti-King and Anti-Arthur authority
So Ruby will be disadvantaged
And the perfect body that Gives the body Of Gilgamesh has its flaw too
Mainly being that As a Demi-god Gilgamesh was pretty weak physicaly and magically compared to the Demi-gods of other pantheon(Heracles,Karna,Arjuna,etc...)because Gilgamesh never trained or anything akin to that since he always won by using The GoB or Ea even a Normal sword could Pierce his skin As shown in strange/Fake when he nearly died by just an Normal Arrow from Alcides (Because alcides could have very well used a Arrow poisoned with the poison of the Hydra )
While Gilgamesh Archer is the Strongest, Gilgamesh Caster is his most dangerous form since he doesn't have Arrogance and Can Very well Go all out from the beginning
And another Disadvantage that come with Perfect Body is the Arrogance of Gilgamesh(i honestly prefer Ozymandias)because the user will start to rely too much on the Gate and If Someone has A counter to it or if someone can deflect the weapons (pretty much everyone Cu being an example since even crippled he fighted 12 hours Gilgamesh)
Gil will pretty much lose to someone like Shirou ,Emiya,Alcides and many other because they can go all out from the beginning Countrary to Gil and they can Easily Counter Gilgamesh Gate and Even Ea in Alcides and Shirou case
| XenoBlaze chapter 6 . 6/30
Erershkigal doesn't know the joy of cookies!
Ruby may smite all who do not understand their deliciousness!
| Dasgun chapter 6 . 6/30
| bluefish1945 chapter 6 . 6/30
Wowww Ruby really had fun. At least she didn't become so arrogant like original Gilgamesh.
I hope she can meet Shiro soon.
Thanks sooo much for update.
| DestinySkyDemon chapter 6 . 6/30
Love the small interactions in the chapter and am eagerly awaiting the next! I especially found the part the banquet entertaining, though I would have honestly liked Weiss to say 'screw it' and go all in since she participated in the food fight in volume 2. Can't wait for the next grand battle of Queen Ruby Rose!
| keestimmer0013 chapter 6 . 6/30
this is some good stuff, keep it up.