Loved it. Great work.

... I wasn't done writing hahaha I just enjoy reading your fics so much because I can always relate to those you write about and feel like even though you may portray them different the still feel in-caracterso as always thank you for writing this!3

THIS MADE ME CRYYYY like noooo ace babyI felt like my heart was breaking for him, thinking he's at fault and that he should be the one to die and all those thoughts

Very nice, it is fantastic to see the other half of that conversation. Thank you for posting!

I just finished watching the Marineford arc, and it just hurts me to see how overcome Ace is that anyone cares that much for him. You really capture that here.

Love this so far!

I absolutely loved this. It’s beautifully heartbreaking

Thank you really all your stories are brilliant it's been a while since I enjoyed a fanfiction for the d brotherThank god I was reading this one shot alone Crying and laughing at the same time

Thank you really all your stories are brilliant it's been a while since I enjoyed a fanfiction for the d brotherThank god I was reading this one shot alone Crying and laughing at the same time

This story made me cry.

It was really sad that in this universe, the Whitebeards didn't know who Luffy is. It was really good to see how that particular conversation went.

Take care.

plz do another one

Oh yes, thank you thank you! I would definitely like seeing more oneshots like this one, definitely.

I really wanted to see what this conversation looked like at the other end. It's almost like there was the slide of puzzle pieces falling into place. I do like how you characterised Marco and Whitebeard. Also, apparently, they don't know who 'Luffy' is, or they simply haven't connected the dots during the conversation. It does confirm that Ace didn't talk about Luffy to his crew tho.

Also, are you going to be updating oneshots to this story (if you write more)? Or will they be separate stories all together? (Just so I know whether to follow this story for updates)

Good work!

-lily

good story.

oh my god
you made me cry
that was so beautiful