Looking forwarrd to the next update :)

Great episode!

I’m a huge fan of the WWW universe. You made it so realistic, and not so out there that i will not like it. Lol can we have one shot of all the scandalous thing they did? Also, another prequel to the prequel of how they ended up together.

Ooooooh this is gonna be gooooood
I wish I could've seen shakky and luffy becoming friends
But rayleighs reaction to the new sabaody is gonna be interesting

I know it's late but yes, so much interest in the expansion of this verse. Especially this one, all the other adventures can be assumed more or less the same except technically they aren't against the law when it happened. Lmao at Shakky and Luffy messing with Rayleigh, I wonder if he'll feel nostalgic meeting Luffy.

Also yea I didn't get it was Helmeppo at the war. I mean I was curious who it was but I couldn't think of anyone and it's gotta be some side character otherwise it wouldn't really be mentioned. I initially guessed it was a marine from the Ace LN but she was strawberry blonde and I kinda forgot about Helmeppo.

Oooh, this is getting fun.

Luffy not wearing his strawhat is just like another collar to him. His strawhat is a symbol of freedom for him. It's good to see that Shakky provides him sanctuary and is affected by what's happening to him. And Shakky is right in saying that Rayleigh will come back to a different Sabaondy Archipelago.

Oh I love it! You really know how to convey emotion!

Oh, didn’t realize the inspection wasn’t over. It’s fine, though, sulking Luffy was fun.

XD me encanta ,es tan luffy osea sus momentos de reflexión, sabia y simple w y como trata de mediar sus emociones hacia las personas que ama (zoro XD ese :despertó en la cama de zoro ,me hace imaginarme cosas ¿sera? w) jajja el rey oscuro va a tener una gran sorpresa XD

We're drawing closer to the confrontation now. Luffy seems so excited there. And Shakki is right - Rayleigh will find a very changed archipelago when he comes back. Though I admit to being surprised Luffy told her, out of all people, his circumstances.

Aaa, so Akainu DID set sail that time, I always assumed he turned back at his meeting with Luffy, or was this a seperate incident.

-lily

Great job so far it’s quite fun.

Man I love your writing! You can capture everyones personaliy so wonderfully! Cant wait for more!

Ah, Zoro being Zoro. Now I’m curious who the mole was that they had ‘disappear’. Lol, Helmeppo hardly ever shows up that I keep forgetting about him. Loved the bit about him, Coby, and Ussop surviving Garp together.
Looking forward to more!

huh.
didn't realize helmeppo had a ponytail