Honestly, I hope Orihime finds out somehow. Sweet girls always make for interesting scenes when they get mad in-character.

Not usually one for Bleach fanfics, but this seemed like a nice little love story.

Though, why is Ichigo calling Orihime by her last name? Even when they spoke, he was on first-name terms with her. That's a creative choice I don't understand.

Ichigo isn't really dense and not stupid ofc, but the main is he isn't dense

Great work! Well done! Things are never simple huh? Lol.

Whoa...this was off to a great start! But I must admit that the ending part of this chapter was a really emotional slap to the face! Good work on that! Lol. And no, I’m not a masochist! LOLZ!

I’m gonna read this until the end! Let’s DO THIS!

Well, I may have criticized you, but honestly I LOVE this story. Seeing it play out was good and I kinda wish there was more to it like a scene where Yoruichi, Rangiku, Rukia, and Tatsuki find out and confront him about him cheating or other various scenes to elaborate, but I just couldn't help myself but enjoy so much of it even as is.

And as a love letter to Nel, *glances at chapter 2* I think you did a fine job sir. Seriously, keep up the good work.

See what I mean? In this chapter, Ichigo presents his defense against what he did as doing it for Nel or for Orihime. Not that he's excusing what he did, but that what he did was for them. While that is true and did need to be said, to a greater extent, it should've been for him, not them. His selfish moment not regulated to that one moment, but his entire love life.

And the argument in this chapter felt so... logical. Not that Ichigo isn't smart, but he's also passionate. I think there should've been more emotion in the fight. Cuz Ichigo's that kinda person. I could see Ichigo doing this but it still felt off, and to me it downplays the end where they all decide to make it work. I felt that there needed to be more conflict.

Alright, as a uh, man of culture, needless to say I enjoyed this chapter.

But as supporter of this story and romance, I feel you could've hammered home something. Ichigo being a selfish bastard. You say Ichigo is happy in this chapter, but the way it comes off seems more like he's doing a chore. That he was doing it for others. Should've done something like say that Ichigo was with Orihime for his own selfish reasons, instead of for Orihime's sake as it came across.

Because I felt that selfish quote from last chapter was beautiful and needed even more capitalization.

I meant to review this earlier I really did, but better late than never.

I really, really enjoyed this chapter. The interactions felt so natural and it was just soo goooooooood. Loved every second I read of this particular one. The ending had me really riling up there for a solid minute. Should've seen me screaming "GRAB HER AND KISS HER!" This was outstandingly good.

Though of course this isn't completely perfect. Damn near close, but I'll let you know in the next reviews why I had a few slight issues(and none of it has anything to do with my OTP being IchiHime).

Holy shit this is one of greatest bleach fanfict I've ever read!

Althought there's still kinda more explanation about Nel's hollow hole since it were remain unknown until now and even Kubo didn't confirmed yet. But regardless the plot is great! I wonder why this story had less review

Oh that was great !

Man, this was so beautiful... why did no one else reviewed this story? Shame on them.
from the start from the very end, it was a wholesome story. the way Ichigo acted, the way Nelliel acted, how everything went.
Hope you are proud for writing this fic, you made an extraordinary job. I know I'm just babbling about how good is this, I'll stop now. good luck and thank you.