Beautifully written story. You have captured a lot of fan fiction readers with a great fictional topic! Please, please Write more. I check FanFiction everyday at least twice. I think I may be addicted to this one. Thank you.

Generally people leave rude comments cause they're anonymous- do us all a favor- don't read the story or at least keep your comments to yourself- with that said- have thoroughly enjoyed story thus far- please up date ASAP

Love the fiction did not I repeat did not like the ending

I don't know why people leave rude comments and I am sorry that you had that happen to you.
I was anxiously awaiting and also dreading what was going to happen in this chapter. Wow, lots of events and emotions going on. You are doing a good job and I appreciate your creativity. I hope that Eddie and Mikey are going to be ok.

I was right about that sleaze bag Barry using Eddie as are candy. Too bad Eddie was gullible and not on birth control... Barry used her and kicked her and her children to the side. Meanwhile Jamie struggles. Absolutely great story telling! Looking forward to Eddie healing both physically, emotionally and in her heart. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Loving this story. I truly needed something to read right now, it’s truly helped me. Writing is a gift but reading good writing is a blessing. Keep posting as often as you can, I know sometimes time can get away from you LOL thanks again, kudos, Nancy

Oh dont make us wait for chapter 4!

Good work.

Wow! Take about a plot twist! Nicely done. I knew Barry was no good. It will be interesting to see how Jamie is able to juggle a 4 month old with helping Eddie and Mikey. But now I wonder if there will be a DNA test on Mikey and if the results are he is Jamie’s son... also looking forward to Eddie’s reaction towards Jamie.

Oh dear good update but help things are going from bad to even worse for them. Glad Barry has gone hope there's more soon. Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks

Yes challenges make us stronger but I read fanfiction for a stress relief ha ha ha sorry I really love your first story sooooo much, as I mentioned before that I will wait, I waited and I don't like where the story is going. Thank you and I will wait for your next one. Stay safe

I still think that the story is going to end with Jamie finding out Mikey is his and Eddie and Jamie getting back together.

So you've got me hooked! Not only the storyline, which has got me anxious to read more, but also your writing style. You really are drawing me in and your stories are a pleasure to read.

Still lovin’ it

I can't decide how are my feelings right now, I read the chapter two times or it was three?, maybe. I am willing to give it a try if there is the slightest possibility that is Jamie's baby, but I mean is really not possible, I guess I will wait anxiously for the next chapter and decide. Because I don't really like Barry; and if it is Jamie's baby and she left to live with Barry, she will took away the opportunity to Jamie of being there for her and his baby through the pregnancy and I think Jamie is that kind of guy. If it is Barry's baby she took the right decision and Jamie should move on and find other person for him and start a family. And if the destiny makes them find their way back to each other then maybe finish their days together. Sad, and honestly I don't like the idea of them apart, but I don't like Jamie waiting for Eddie, when she did not wait for him. Anyway I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter and make the decision. Thank you for the story and please update soon. Stay safe.