Awesome. The last scene was especially good.

great script, i can just imagine all the characters on the show actually saying those things, very funny.

Oh, how I wish this had been a true-blue episode. It's magnificant! You've got everyone in character, all the plot tricks there, everything's just perfect.

HAHAHA!
"What we need is a universal code recognised by both sexes. Like hailing a taxicab. You stand on the sidewalk, stick your hand in the air and yell 'taxi!' Single available women should put their hand up and yell 'man!' at the top of their voice. Then any man interested could just swoop in."
Oh man, I loved that line! You're an amazing writer, you keep the characters in character so perfectly!
The return of bookman, lol! I'm dying laughing here.
My only nitpicking is in the use of the word trolly. I believe American's call them shopping carts...but I'm not American so what do I know?
DW

Awesome! You should write more Seinfeld Fanfics sometime, Pjazz!

That was really good. It had me laughing at parts, cause I can really imagine the characters doing some things you said. It's awesome! Keep writing. _

I consider myself something of a Seinfeld afficianado and I can say that you should have been writing the real thing! Your stories are just so spot-on that it is scary. Please keep writing them-it's almost as if the show never left the air! Giddyup!

This is actually really good... It really reads like a Seinfeld script. Most Seinfeld fics aren't that good; yours is a diamond in the rough (or at least a rhinestone).

That was an enjoyable read, and it sounded like a real Seinfeld show. Good work!

That was an enjoyable read, and it sounded like a real Seinfeld show. Good work!

You know, I have seen quite a few Seinfeld fics along my stay here, and, truth be told, quite a few of them are lackluster. Your fics, however, ROCK! These have got to be some of the best Seinfeld fics ever! In fact, I'll bet that these could've been actual episodes.
Poor George. Well, keep writing, I hope you set up a new one soon.

WOW! That has to be the best! You have to submit that somewhere you can make money off of it. That was amazing! Its has everything a Seinfeld Episode has! What more can I say but WOW! WOW WOW WOW WOW!

very good in parts. uses bits from the series. the plot was weak but flowed well. not very original but is exciting, seinfeld-ess piece of writing.

I loved your story! I was cracking up throughout the entire script. It is really really good. You have a natural talent. Keep Writing... its one of the bests stories i've read so far!

This was s0 great! PJazzer, your scripts are finally finding a voice of their own, rather than relying on subplots, even though I found THOSE (sponge)worthy of praise as well. Keep it up...keep it going.