Lenne she did not get captured during the war her stupid boyfriend Shuyin thought it was a good idea to break into the the city of Bevelle and the to attempt to use a secret weapon against the city and overload its main generator destroying the city itself Lenne then caught wind of this plot she went stop her like crazy boyfriend from committing Mass genocide when she was there the Beverly Guard. It was the blood contract for Summoner Lenne death Shuyin real name is Tidus he changed his name when he first became a Blitzball player he wanted a cool nickname is he claimed the one in the same. And just so everyone knows the reason that he thought you know was Tidus thought yuna was. That was yuna past self reincarnation Lynn also had another boyfriend before shooting he was Al Bhed Warrior unfortunately when the war's end it history was whitewashed by the victors you know the old saying history is written by The Victors of War that's why there's no reference into lens first boyfriend the one that truly cared about he was a Al bled Guardian to Yevon himself this young man's entire family was dedicated to protecting him but his story for another time just so you know the song that the wish that spans 1,000 years years it's not about Shuyin and never was it was about Lenne first person who ever cared for her the first person who saw her for a person they were friends since childhood she felt bad for the way she treated him towards the end that is the true story of Zanarkand that was whitewashed in history

I really enjoyed this story, and plan to read the other 2 soon. The first story I read from you was Twisted Destiny and I've made my way to here.

I'm a huge FFX and FFX-2 fan. I feel like the chapter with Shuyin and Lenne's death was a bit rushed, but I look forward to reading the next parts.

All in all, this was very well done. -

4 years later with the X/X-2 remaster coming out, I got the urge to read the Silver Wings Trilogy again. I forgot just how gut wrenching those last couple chapters were. 24 year old guy here and you still made my eyes water. Not sure if you check your reviews anymore, but if you do, I just wanted to let you know that you're a fantastic writer. Time to start on the next story, even though is currently 1:30am.

This was an absolutely beautiful story and so well written.

Wow, that was an amazing story. Extremely well written, i loved every word of it, can't wait to start reading the sequel

Really good story. There were some inaccuraces with the video game. For instance Shuyin went to activate Vegnugun once, the alarm went off, he was captured and then was filmed in the cage we see in the game. Afterwards he breaks out and goes after Vegnugun a second time and that's when Lenne comes to stop him. And they both die then.

But besides that the rest of the story was very accurate to the game. I really liked your involvement of Lady Yunalesca and Lord Zaon. I also liked your character Allyn. At first I didn't like her because she seemed like a psycho bitch (lol) but as the story progressed and the reader learns more about her you kind of feel bad for her because of all she's been through.

Also, I'm not sure where you are going with the reincarnation thing but I'll read the next two stories to find out. I'm skeptical of it because it is evident in the game that Shuyin and Lenne are separate souls from Yuna and Tidus. Technically Yuna does harbor Lenne's spirit in the dressphere, but she isn't exactly the reincarnation of Lenne. But you said you would explain it so I'll just read ahead and see where you are going with it.

Overall I loved your story and can't wait to read Silver Wings: 2. :)

First off, I want to say that you're a great writer and your descriptions are beautifully done :)

Also, I like how you put Shuyin in Tidus' shoes like that prelude in FFX-great start!

So, Shuyin's kind of a perv and wild, but I look forward to seeing him grow as I read on.

I can't wait to read more-I tend to like the Shuyin/Lenne fanfics :D

UrawakaiPisces

i love this story! it was really good and now i have a better clue of what went down wit shuyin and lenne. :D

Wow!

You're a really good writer!

Well Done With The Story!

GG

Woot! Another cool story!

(I figured I should leave behind SOME sort of review, heh. xD)

XX-diamonds-XX

OH MY #(%*##! # %#ING CRAP! THAT WAS WODNERFUL! I loved every single part of it, and you even had me crying through the last three chapters. Beautifully written! Great job, fantastic job! Ah, I can't get over how great this story was! Now I'm excited to read the rest of this trilogy adn any other work you ahve. Once again, AWESOME job! :)

Oh my.

T_T

That was perfectly lovely.

Ooh, I love this story. )

er...what's with all this space at the bottom...?

Hello there! I'm only finished up to the point of chapter 10, but I really like this story you have written. I like how you made "Real Emotion" a song by Lenne, but I guess I do kind of wonder how the song would be known to Spira 10 years later. It would have to be something fairly familiar to the people later on if Leblanc took to singing it in Luca. But I guess that an alternative would be that Yuna's songstress dressphere had Lenne's spirit in it, which let Leblanc know the song and its lyrics because Lenne had influence on the mind of the dressphere's wearer. I know this might seem a little cold, but I think it may be a little cliche to include the psychotic ex trying to end the romance between the protagonists. I think it's a slightly overdone plot twist that I've read pretty often, but it does add interest to the story, I guess. I like how you characterize Shuyin and Lenne, and it was a nice change to read something where Shuyin and Zaon were best friends, giving Lenne and Shuyin an automatic link. I really like this, so don't get me wrong with the criticism of your little plot twist and the use of "Real Emotion." I think this is a well done story. Well, I must be off to bed!