Holy crap, this story made my guts positively ACHE with the angst! I loved it!

Damn, I know this was written years ago, but damn if you didn't just convert me into a Sam/McKay fan. Though I wish there had been much more Daniel and Janet in the story, especially in helping Sam through Jack and Debbie's horrid treatment of her. I was really surprised at how much I enjoyed reading this story. I loved McKay in this, and I could totally see him fussing after her in his ego maniac way. Love it.

Interesting fic. The characters were kinda OOC (especially Jack), except for Sam and McKay, and Debbie was a bit too evil to be realistic, but I still enjoyed it. Mostly b/c of the nice! McKay and the whole Sam/McKay bit. Especially him throwing the knife at Ba'al (XD "Rodney the Goa'uld Slayer" Hahaha XP-I love the joke you had w/ that), and the kiss, of course. Anyhoo, good job! It's not often I find some good Sam/McKay out there _

Luv,

Miss Pookamonga ;-P

Hey! So I've revisited this site once again, and I realized that I was miles behind on this story! How could that have happened? This is by far my fav angst story, EVER. I just want McKay to hold Sam! lol This is really the first story that has really made me NOT want a Sam/Jack pairing. However...I really don't want to be mean or rude, but I have a problem with this story. It's just not...totally believeable. The fact that Hammond and even Jack would allow such violence and banter in the SGC isn't real, especially since hitting another officer is grounds for a court martial alone, not to mention Jack and Debbie's relationship. Because wouldn't that mean that Sam and Jack could have a relationship? Anyway, the great thing about this though, is that it's FICTION. So in this AU story, it's totally right! So well done once again! I'm so involved with this that I'm feeling really mad at Jack and I type this, and I don't think I even want to watch Stargate later! Okay, I ALWAYS want to watch Stargate. Anyway, I think I'll go look on YouTube for some Sam/McKay videos...probably aren't any. Maybe I'll be the first to make one. Well, if I haven't taken up too much of your time (and mine, since its 330 in the morning lol), I'll end this now.

Thank god I read the ending of this part and whole fic first and didn't waste time, effort and emotional investment on this fic.

If I did read it, I would probably regret it for a long time especially cause I would feel ill after all the Sam/McKay mush.

this is a fabulous story! I really enjoyed it :)

dude! you rock. Great fic, loved the action and drama. And sam/mckay! one of my fav pairings. *adds story to favourites*

Great ending but I want more now. Mst have more sam/mckay. will you be writing anymore stories with the pair in?

Well I love all the mckay/samness

“You’re a better woman than me,” McKay answered, “I wouldn’t have done it. Why did you?”

- I would hope Sam makes a better woman than Mckay:)

Very happily going off to read more now...

Yay! Action mckay!

ooh, interesting.

and i love mckay as concerned and hating it.

I really enjoyed that, since i've been looking all over for sg1 fics with mckay in them. sad to see it say 'THE END' but pleaseed when i noticed you'd written many more chapters. yay! now off to read those.

I like the nice Mckay but i also love the jerk Mckay. I have just spent like 30 mins reading this and it was well worth it. This is brilliant.

Ouch. Sorry but that's all I can say. McKay and Sam, hm, maybe if I'm in one of those moods of mine but normally not in my eyes. But anyway well done on having finished yet another chapter.

Excellent story I really enjoyed reading it. And yes please to an epilogue!