This is one of the best fanfics I've seen in a long time.

i was wondering when someone was going to look at the agents and wonder who they really were. i was just waiting for a story like this to show up, and here it is! you've made my day! *glomp*

i was really touched by this. the idea of a little girl with a trio of agents both amuses me and gets me all teary (and i'm not sure why the latter, but it does). and the upgrades somehow recognizing her was very poignant. UAGH! now i'm all emotional!

wow. MAN, i really like this story!

haunting.

wow. now that's deep, real deep. do you put others into your own stories?

That is really well done Shadow. the characterisation and the plot.

*Smith enters . Reads Shadow's 283736272th story abut him*

Smith: She hasn't given up on me.

Selina: No.

Smith: Good. I have plans for her.

*They both smile.*

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Bravo! Excellente!

no matter what else you write you seem to stay a matrix artist at heart! LOVE IT! amazing story, i really enjoy the tie in with shade! This is great. i really hope to see another story with Shade. keep on writing!

~hiei1317~

Hullo.

Very pretty little ah, vignette (is that the word?), but maybe you could have tidied it up a little.

... _ I'll show you what I mean.

There's a couple of points where an adventurous comma sneaks in - "I see, Agents. That's all." Prolly be better leaving it out, as here: Watched every move I took, with great interest. Again, it doesn't really need a comma.

"And sooner or later they grew very cute" - personally, I don't think that works... Maybe 'And sooner or later I grew attached to them.'

Hee, there's some con-crit to be going on with! O:) Keep up the good work.

Very nice narrative voice. I've always wondered what happened to Brown and Jones after the first movie. It's sad to think of them in exile, but worse to think of them deleted.

Very nice. I always had a feeling that Brown and Jones were 'infected' (for lack of a better word) through their connection to Smith, and that they would choose exile over deletion when the time came.