Omg I really love ur story, so well-written and touching, especially the part Chris buried Wyatt hopefully they can really change the future, I don’t hate the sword I want to know how Chris handle it, but if history is going to repeat itself I am so hate the sword Humm..

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Wow, I love this! Great ideas and really great writing!
I adore anything with grams, Penny Halliwell is possibly my favorite character. Definitely one of my top.
I'd love it if you hacked out my Charmed fic and told me what you thought. It's a prequel, all about Grams and the Necromancer, Beginning when they first met. It's going to be a long-term writing project. I have over 30 chapters planned to add to the already existing 18 :).

Thank you I can't wait to read the rest of this!

This was actually a really interesting story. I never considered the idea that Pipe could be holding the sword for Piper. And technically Wyatt didn't pull the sword from the stone in the show you mentioned, he merely took it from a less powerful being. So your theory about Chris would work, including the part where he would hold it for Chris after Piper's death since Chris was still so young. I like the story, and I think it was well done. I expected the sisters to perhaps help in setting up some surprises for the demons, but other than that, it worked.

Funny how Piper doesn't give a crap about Wyatt in this story. XD Not very believable that...

Liking this so far! but Leo didn't shift the balance between good and evil in the first place, that was Gideon. He committed an act of great evil to shit it BACK so the balance was restored. If he was going to be punished for anything, it'd be the murder of an elder. Though in the series it was decided nothing should happen because Gideon endangered the world and betrayed his trust, killed Chris and tried to kill Wyatt so they let it go.

I wonder if you could post a story about Piper and Leo's reaction of the consequences, now that they "changed fate".

This story sucks!

"Oh geez! I have another grandson?!" Victor exclaimed, alarmed.
LOL!

I'm really sucked into this story!

Eight years later, and I just found this story. Yeah. Go me. I've spent the past two days reading it, and have seriously run the gamut of emotions. At the risk of sounding trite: I laughed. I cried. I cringed. I cheered. And I loved. I loved this, m'dear. Absolutely, positively loved every last word. You are a genius. I did NOT see the thing with Excalibur coming, even though it's actually a brilliant idea and makes a hell of a lot more sense than what ended up actually being the case. To be honest, I thought Chris was going to turn out to be Aragorn, what with his "but not this day!" speech to the Resistance and whatnot. Turns out I was half-right; I had the corruption-via-magical-artifact thing right, but wrong story. Heh.

I really. I just. Can't. Not right now. I really can't form coherent thoughts right now because I am just blown away by the complexity and the depth of this story, the absolutely spot-on characterizations, the...unf. I love it. I want to marry it and have its babies. Seriously though, you totally deserve kudos not only for this epic length fic and fascinating plot, but for just how pitch perfect your characters were. Most of the time, I didn't even have to look at the tags in the dialogue to know who was speaking, as their voices were so unique and so true to how they were written on the show (when, of course, they were written well...) and that's the hallmark of a truly great character writer.

Take a bow, my friend. You deserve it.

Oh great they just HAD to keep the stupid thing...

.Amazing. Seriously, your writing is incredible and I love it (:

Oh wow, talk about just leaving us hanging... XP hehe

Great fic, thank you so much for posting!

*~tsukiko~*

Genius.