Ah, only three short chapters, and already this is looking good. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen!

What a disapionting way to stop a story. Good plot, but too rushed, not enough background, or discriptions. Better than most on spelling and grammer though.

PLEASE UPDATE, PLEASE PLEASE, WITH A PEACH ON TOP!

What happens next?

hey, updat! i want to know what happens dangit!

very kool! please update soon!

i like it, a bit short for three chapters but all in all its good, i can't wait to see some more jareth/sarah fluff, those two so belong together, well keep it up! :)

Not too bad, seemed a little rushed in parts of it but otherwise fine. Update soon.

What a wonderful story! I can't wait until next chapter.

your chapters should be longer, it would be such a good story if only you developed the situation a little more

it needs a lot of work, make sure to spell check, & its spelled Jareth.

I don't think that you should stop writing either because of a bad review. If every one on this web site did that. Then there wouldn't be any stories! I hope that you'll write more stories in the future. The only way that you can get better is by keeping up writing you're stories.

Hell, when I first started writing my stuff sucked. I hope that you'll write more stuff. I guess my main complaint with the story is that it went on rather fast. I can get by the spelling and grammar my self. Because I have the same problem ( God bless my Beta Readers and supporters. )

Any ways.

I hope that you'll write some more soon, Keep writing Labyrinth. Most people in the Labyrinth section are polite and helpful.

Yea i know how you feel. I can't write well. You know thats bad. I am 18 and i feel like I am stile in 8th girde You see what i mean I can't evin spell that . I tried to write a story. One day I got this E-Mail that really mead me upseat. With me I am abile to make fun of my mastaks. It's when peple make it sound realy mean is when i can't handl it. well good luck on the nexts chapter. I will be checking in to see if you wrot more soon. bye bye bye

DUDE! Just because you get rude reviews and all that doesn't mean you stop! What if you get a job someday and ppl critisize your work? Are you gonna walk away from that too? Your story be cool but you just don't stop right when things are gettin interesting... ppl get mad (like me) and write reviews to make the author mad and write more (like I'm doing)... I look forward to reading more of your story...

Sayanora

Moondragon

Hey! i love the plot of your fic & i'm sorry if anyone has been rude about your fic. Just a kind bit of advice :) if you are getting hate-mail about your fiction, don't block it out! :) take it as a good way of improving your work :) I think this story could go further :) Hope to see you writing more often :D

~marysian