OHHHH MAIIII KAMIIIIIII
My OC is named Midori too! What in Starclan is going on?!
Although I haven’t done the part where Midori and Mako (My fan fiction) find out they’re sisters yet. But I will rename her soon to Midori Kino, soon.
She has a little over shoulder length wavy-curly hair and is a brunette. Has the same green eyes like Mako, and her favorite food is Cherry Pie. She loves cooking and science, and is interested in Biology-unlike Mako-, Health, reading, writing, and Astrology. Some
(My OC is Mako’s sister, yet she grows a close relationship to Rei XD and she resembles me.)

I hope you read this (as it was a while since it was updated) I like the general idea but I think Nodoka should have some kind of break as she is a much of a victim as Ranma. I have a more sadistic end for Genma lock his mind sohe can only preceive everything but not affect anything and let him get near the brink of madness but never to never there.

This book is pretty awesome :D (just asking, since Makoto's my favorite character as well, could you have her be in more or the story? And, you know, in fight scenes too becase she's fairly strong)

Please write more chapters soon

Please continue this story it's too good to just abandon

this is really interesting please continue!

I take it this is discontinued.

I know its been over a year since you did these updates. Your first chapter makes me not want to read further. Everything is just happening without any questions in it. No uncertainty. No real emotion even. You'd think seeing a twin you thought was dead would have a bigger reaction than Oh ok you're you and your alive lets hug! There should at least be some internal monologing to build up and a hell of allot bigger emotional release.

Not bad ideas just really way too easy and uninvolved for anyone reader or characters.

Spokavriel yahoo. com

Great chapter and story so far pleases continue this story soon.

I'm sorry, but the whole first few chapters feel like a big deus ex to me and I've found that Ranma without the curse doesn't really feel like Ranma either. I think you may have rushed into the story trying to get to where you wanted without really giving much thought to how you got there. Perhaps you should go back and try again, and take your time to think it through this time.

AtlantisWolf

Please update soon. I really thing your story is amazing.

The plot is enough to make me ignore the grammar.

I think, however, you msy want to have a beta reader to back you up.

Spell Check is a very good thing, but it can't deal with synonyms and homonyms.

I truly like this story but you should fix some of the errors. One you got a few mad's spelled as made. You also got a few Glad's spelled as glade. In all of the pervious chapters.

You got it wrong again Hakura is the only one to attack on Purpose Neptune waits before she attacks and she would at least ask questions unlike Uranus.

I am sorry to say this but even with the short amount of Manga's you read from Ranma you would have realized that Kasumi would have believed Ranma she may have found it hard to but she would believe him. To say otherwise is just being to mean to her.