Reviews for Memories of a Forgotten Childhood |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wtf? I'm pretty sure this is the wrong story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you are basing this mostly on the musical, then please place it in the Musical/Play section. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update asap! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must...keep...reading...please...update...I LOVE YOUR STORY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgs this is so awsome ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! they're all like...together! I can't wait to read more! please update really soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! New one on me. I like it though. Did you write a story elaborating on the scene at the masquerade where she falls in love with Erik, or could you do one in the future? I would love to read more about that :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh I hope they save her! I can't wait to read more! I hope you update really soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Erik rocks! please updat soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good. I want to see what happens next to poor Christine. Oh, and hold on Erik! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read the story today and i LOVE it. please continue |
![]() ![]() kep writing! Phantom&Christine 4ever! Raoul is a stupid pretty boy! Mwahahahaha! |
![]() ![]() Good but the last few chapters are abit slow and dare i say boring? sorry the begining is great and i hope you appreciate my honesty. i am sorry to hear you won't be continuining for a while as that is annoying and off puting! when you do please make a happy ending with no deaths expect for possibly raoul or kite as she annoys me Well done for writing a good fanfic (so far)! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! Update! plez! kite is an interesting person, but i definitely thinks she's useful. stupid raoul, he deserved to get puked on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good plot line, but slow it down a little bit. Are you eager to get to the more meatier parts of the story? Well, give us some suspense, you're dialogue is sometimes hard to follow, just proof everything and slow it down. I know, I hate it when you have a story all mapped out and you're trying to rush to the end. It's a good idea to clear your mind and reread all you've written. Like I said, good plot, interesting characters. But I'd like to see a little more background-maybe more flashbacks? ;) |