Beautiful. A profoundly touching tribute to a tragic story. This story is the epitome of all those who mourn for Erik - the fallen angel of music.

Thank you for writing it.

*in tears* That was wonderfull! And very beautifull.

Wow, speechless here.

Thanks ever so much.

Aw...much enjoyed, for all its bittersweetness.

That was beautiful. So astoundely poetic. The last chapers, and the first were definetly, some of the best I have read. I must say, it is a toss up between 'haunted' abd this. You are magic.

This storyline continues to captivate my interest. I enjoy re-reading the story over & over. As with the movie, this story has an "essense" of personal redemption that resonates to your soul, compelling you to search for additional chapters. I am looking forward to additions. A full novel, perhaps? "Haunted" is also a great read, but well written ghost stories frighten me.

A great story, a truely amazing interpertation, albeit a little short.

That was good. I don't know what to say. It was so unique, creative, poetic. Short but touching and direct. I really loved your perspective... Lovely, lovely. An wonderful idea.

I honestly can't think of any critique. It was beautiful.

Oh, YAY, there IS more! *happy dance* The additional chapters were just as beautiful and heartwrenching as the first; how DO you and Henry manage it? ;)

Amazing. I was immediately captivated. Please consider writing an entire book! The biblical angel-phantom connection is magical. I can't wait to show my son (a budding sci-fi-biblical novelist 15)this story. Can you imagine a movie remake based on this novela!

Exquisite

The best explanation I have ever read for the phantom of the opera

oh man, thats so lovely. *tear tear* :) write more on haunted

utterly beautiful. an unexpected but lovely point of view (well, views), perfectly written.

This is beautiful. A very unique perspective and truly heart-wrenching. In the words of the Phantom: "Brava! Brava! Bravissima!"

Alright, I've been staring at this little blinker in an empty box for the past eight minutes, incapable of coming up with something intelligible to say...

*wipes stream of tears* The ending was gorgeous... how DO you come up with these things? It would never have occurred to me to make Erik the incarnate of the actual Angel of Music; sheer brilliance. And so ORIGINAL, as always! I'm truly dumbfounded (and humbled!). Magnificent work, my dear, as always. :)