This is great!

I always wanted to know what happened after the soldiers ambushed them. You did a good job!

Good fic! You should write more like this!

I really love this sentence "Chris shook his head, wondering if instead of 'if' Leo was tempted to say 'when you get caught'" It's so funny xD

That was nice too I always wanting to know what happens in this episode )

Meÿli.

Good story. :)

Yup, I wanna review but I don't really have anything to here goes...

'With those hands…The hands of my…'father?Was Chris about to add 'father'/'dad' there?And would someone, ANYONE explain to me why some Chris fics are under the character 'Elise R.' and not 'Chris H.'? And at times, Wyatt's 'Belthazor' instead of 'Wyatt H.'?I've been wondering about that for a long time...Belthazor is Cole Turner while Elise R. is Phoebe's boss or something, right?So really, why?

really nice way to show what happened i was always wondering about it

good story!

aw sweet, quality father and son time ;)

It's a nice idea to fill that gap, it was really pretty illogical in that episode.

Only it doesn't make a lot of sense that they could just orb back to their time...

That was just ... cute. I liked it :P

I never really thought of what happened when they meet the soldiers but I did love the way you described it. Chris saving Leo twice and Leo saving him made Chris’ gesture of buying him a drink and then Leo buying Chris a drink even more powerful and filled with meaning. I like the insight you provide on episodes it makes them come alive again and makes feel like I’m watching them for the first time Keep up the great work!

it was a super cute story! Real nice... the only thing... why was Chris so worried about them shooting Leo? He is already dead... he is buller proof! But well...we'll call it poetic licence cuz it made the story beautiful...great work

Cute! _

ok, you're right-I wanna. I liked it.