Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on the story.

i love your story. I hope that you will continue writing it.

sorry, i liked your story until you gave your little description of your version of the body flicker. you made a great tecknique into trick.

very good

good even though confusing its good

great story really funny and interesting

just one word

harem

I like the naruhina but I think a harem would be pretty sweet.

Maybe overtime u could have the girls realising what a great guy naruto is?

but whatever dude its your story

GOOD STORY!

I like your point of wiew of naruto's world. it's a great story. Please Keep going. I can't wait for the next chapter

Great story. Did Naruto make a pact where as he uses more and more of the Kyuubi's chakra, the more his body changes to it's demonic form, where it will eventually belong to, and be in the control of the Kyuubi? Or something...?

My God? Is Naruto doing all that?

This is one of the most annoying stories I have ever tried to read. The content is average, the style-not so much. Do you even know what a comma is? Do you know what a run on sentence is? If you don't, then you have no business writing. I could bitch on and on forever about your grammar, but I won't. Just please, get an English handbook and use it. If you are going to write, you should respect the rules of the English language.

Interesting. I'm curious what will happen next.

Interesting fic. Like the plot. Keep up the good work and update soon.

i like it keep wrighting ple :)

Great story Keep going