Great story

I've two favorites stories with "Gun Drops", this is one 9the other is "Awake in a dream"). This story is so perfect that I translated for portuguese,with the due the author's authorization, of couse!

Loved this story

It was so sweet for Grissom to make the first (awake) move

Well done

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That was an interesting prediction on what would have happened. Of course, the episode was completely changed, but it's nice reading some "what if" stories to get a taste of what we missed. Nice job portraying the subtle start of a relationship between them, and Sara's understated but obvious compassion.

This is my favourite version of what could have happened in Gum Drops - awesome story!

Hi! I'm Cla from Italy, I really enjoyed your fic... Maybe you should write one or two addictional chapters, I'd like to know how the story goes on! Anyway very good job!

Bye

Cla

OH, GOOD FIC! Too bad that they changed it around on us... alas, no geeks sleeping together YET! good fic, though, enjoyed it!

if only this really happened, but nice job anyway!

um the end?

how can it be the end...it only jsut began

oh please make another chapter for this please?

Sassy

(who will kiss your feet if i have to)

Awsome, Superb, Excellent...I could go on.

You stayed true to the charaters and I could really see this happening. But of course, we all know we most likely see what happens behind closed doors. But we can only hope the writers take a page from your book.

Thanks.

I love this story. It is so in character. Great piece.

awesome and simply brilliant!

Love Ur version. I can't wait for this episode to air, I just hope that TIIC wont screw this up. If they mess this up then I will seriously cry. Some one wrote a story w/ spoiler for this one but then made it a NS pairing, I was bothering me for forever, how do you get an NS pairing out of Gum Drops. Seriously, somethimes you just have to face the facts.

Very good story. Well-written and believable, but I have one suggestion to make it more believable:

You use the line "We’ll figure something out baby. Don’t worry. Try to get some rest". I can't imagine Sara calling Grissom "baby" in this stage of their relationship. Likewise for the "come on honey" line. If you took these out, I think it would be much more subtle and believable.

Good job!

Awesome, awesome story.

Will Grissom blow Sara away and stay? Will he leave trying to forget the need to spoon her again. Tune in for chapter 2 soon?