Bah, she got off too easy

Lol public apology would be mandated for Kim anyway cause her and Ron would practically be a celebrity couple it would be all over the tabloids if she didn't

"I hope you know how much I love him. I mean, we've been friends forever, and now I've been feeling something totally new. And after all this time, I've opened up my mind and I see, he was always there for me." Really creative there and entire verse of "Could It Be" nearly word for word. Let me put it this way credit for the reference but that's only a tenth the reprimand for going way too far with it close sentance structure and about 5 or 6 original words is enough to make the reference with out being too blunt as to be copying.

wow thats good

wel right hand salute and out

good evening

u got talent mate keep up the writting

a vtol is from crysis isnt it

VERY INTERESTING! HOW COULD I HAVE MISSED THIS STORY?

Of course, it was Richard Sirois's artwork that got me started in K.P. fanfiction. And you took the same tack on the "Rich" character that I did: a scholar, a tactician, a fellow-mission'er. And you got the same reaction from MrDrP that I did for portraying a romance sitch between Rich and Kim.

Only my story is a little more serious.(Solo Mission, chpt.5)Unrequited love and all that soap opera stuff) Your story is more fun.

Good story, wished you had given us that epilogue you mentioned. Keep it coming!

Not bad not bad at all. I like the way Ron slightly flipped out and spilled some of the mmp a couple of times. As far as the ambiguity of ch. 6 it would have been more effective if Kim had been a little more confused about her feelings in the previous chapters. After her reaction in ch. 5 the end pretty much spoke for itself. The rest was pretty good though and would have worked perfectly if she didn't seem so determined to get fix things.

great story, i enjoyed it much

maybe you should write mor! i come back to all my fav things writen and see if there is any more!

Oh DUDE dat was cool thumbs three metres up high i always was a perticular fan to ron and tara

its gud. realy gud. but one question. hus richard?

Well written but I have my own problems with Sirois's artwork in this case and consequently,this story. The ultimate in *Mary Sue-ism*...sorry.

I wouldn't mind an epilogue. You did an excellent job!

Bravo and two thumbs up! That's all I can say!