what

Ok, ending was an ICKLE bit rushed... But...
Other than that...
*Inhales deeply*
OHMYGODTHISISTHEBESTTHINGIHAVEEVERREADINMYENTUREFUCKINGLIFETIIIMMEEEWOOOOHOOOO!
Congrats.

Lol XD this was absolute perfection! The last part where light is just like, shut up Misa is so perfect

And wonder of wonders she did ROTFLMAO.

Wwooowww! I seriously thought L was gonna die at the end!...But genius! You rescued him in then awesomest way! Ooohhh! Did their dark smiles at the end mean they promised future sex together?! Sooo exciting! XD And then way Light tells Misa to shut up XD

You are a great writer and good with your sentances...tho i started crying.. haha it was cute but light is now scarier than ever to me lol...L is gonna have to just be friends with light..cus i claimed L haha...i would make him strawberry cake whenever he wanted : ...i would say keep makin them :))

I love it!

loved it.

you know, the thing i find most unbelievable is misa shutting up. lol.

Oh my God, this was brilliant.

I like the ending! Very nice idea of L liking to submit to someone, and Light liking to take over someone with more power than him. It's great!

No matter what I say, it won't do justice to this story.

Thank you, this was a good read.

oh don't you ever change a thing! except for the word you have wrong...I can't for the life of me think of which word it was at the moment..(and it's to late to re read it now..) but if you re read it...you'll find it in the top half... I think it was to the left hand side of the screen as well.. If you do need a Beta to read over your stories..I would be very happy to do so..I absolutely love the way you write!

OK, my guilty fanfic pleasure is the Kira wins genre. This is so well written. I love how they twist each other into knots, and I love the internal monologues. The ending doesn't have the same tone as the rest if the fic, but I can't imagine how it would. It must be very difficult to move the situation between L and Kira out into the rest of the world. I just really enjoyed this.

Fucking brilliant.

wow...

*wow!*

that was so incredible, you left me absolutely speechless. Thank you so much for writing and posting this amazing piece of art!