AWWWWWW please update? i like it so far, i like how you have lucius being the submissive one in the relationship, when usually he is the dominant one in the relationship. please continue i absolutely love it!

I've never read a Sirius/Lucius fic before. It was... strange

Though I have to say - you have a knack for description without making it sound mechanical. This is good stuff. I just don't feel comfortable with the plot. But this is only because I'm not used to this pairing - nothing else. Everything else is fabulous.

However, I think you should make a bigger distinction between where each journal entry ends. It gets confusing.

Otherwise, amazing job!

Ps - thanks a lot for reviewing Seven. You're welcome. Want me to continue or...?

I actually really like this story so far.

There's nothing really bad about it.

Personally, I think you should continue it,soon.

so sweet ;)

good job!

ashumaniel

aw so kawaii! *cuddles lucius and sirius*

weird paring, but i like how you've writen it

This was good. That's all I have to say really. Good job!

Savvy

Wow, that was intense! Good job on the fic i liked how you added all the little details that make it so much better! Well I really like your style of writting hope to see more stories from you! _