Big Brother...

What a beautifully told and wonderfully paced timeline of events. It played out very nicely and I even liked the present tense although I normally don't care for it. But it worked here. You wrote it very well.

Sapphireswimming

That is a very sweet little story.

-Dyslexic Nerd

That's beautiful. You write wonderfully.

Great story. That totally seems like something Peter would do.

That was beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I absolutely loved it! You provoked so many different feelings in me that I'm not sure which one to focus on. This is really an amazing piece of writing! :D

Loved it... You almost got me to cry...

Luna

This...is an incredible story. I love all the emothions that you put into it, to make it just perfectly perfect. I almost cried at the end, it was so good!

Oh Peter! You are just too good for words. He is so sweet and caring, and he expects so much of himself. I just love him :) Awesome story!

that was really good...but I do have a question...

When you write something and put it on fan fiction can you see the account names of the people who read your story or just the number of people who have read your story?

(I hope that makes sense)

Wow...another great story! I really like the portrayal of Peter in your stories. The perfect big brother...why can't mine be like him?

Wow, promises, I really liked this one. A big brother (or sister) is hard to be.

I really liked your story. It totally protrayed Peter's relationship with his different siblings. :D

wow. It makes me cry every time I read this.

That is so adorable Peter is so cute as alittle boy loved it