I loved this so much! It's unique from all the other reveal fanfictions. This one had feeling in it, it felt extremely real.

Aw~

S-so freaking beautiful...
You have to keep writing stories like this,
YOU HAVE TO!

I enjoyed reading this. Great job.(:

I know this idea has been done time and time again, but this was done really well.

So many feels...

I love this fic! I like how you made the revelation more of a mental thing rather than a "OMG I'm being dissected and mom I'm a ghost" one. And how the characters weren't OOC at all ('Cept for Jack a really tiny bit. Like, Microscopic tiny), and how Maddie and Jack accepted him perfectly.
Keep up the good work!

-FallingNarwhals

Not bad, a nicely done reveal. Thank you for posting!

Awwwww that was poetic? Sweet I don know but it was nice.

Whooo this was a hokey fic but I like how it turned out. A few months old but I wanted to post it regardless. It was so hard to keep them all IC you wouldn't beleive it XD written for a friend who has read it already. Hope you people enjoyed it.

This was a sweet story. I'm glad I found it.

Everyone is very much in character, and it could have happened that way.

Thanks for writing this piece.

Sincerely,
Miriam

Fantastic job! I LOVED this. Bravo!

*deadpans* and then he fainted from exhaustion.

brittney

D'aww. Cute story.

I'm glad you mentioned how tired he was and how he had pretty much *no* energy throughout the fic. It was great foreshadowing. You didn't just throw the transformation in for the heck of it; you actually made it make sense. :D Good job. Thanks for writing.

AWSOME!